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My Chosen Valentine
Protecting ourselves
is the natural response
to a Universe of experience:
stories we don’t tell—
scars we won’t reveal
hidden vulnerabilities
Choose Love anyway;
it purges negativity—
not that of a judge or critic
taking offense at storms
blowing back in their face;
but, from your own heart
Empty your innermost coffers
as a gift to others—
then refill for yourself
Balance is the footpath
of Universal Love
~
is the natural response
to a Universe of experience:
stories we don’t tell—
scars we won’t reveal
hidden vulnerabilities
Choose Love anyway;
it purges negativity—
not that of a judge or critic
taking offense at storms
blowing back in their face;
but, from your own heart
Empty your innermost coffers
as a gift to others—
then refill for yourself
Balance is the footpath
of Universal Love
~
Author's Note
To my Valentine, Johnny, a gift of deep friendship which allows me to be completely myself. ❤👫❤
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14th Feb 2020 11:46am
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Anonymous
14th Feb 2020 12:05pm
Thank you for this wonderful gift that dearly complements the true companion you are to me. I wish to walk the footpath with you for as long as we live. 👫❤📝
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14th Feb 2020 5:49pm
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14th Feb 2020 8:26pm
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14th Feb 2020 12:38pm
Dear A,
This is like a morning prayer to be uttered and honored daily. A beautiful and loving ode with so much honor infused. I so appreciate the lift both you and JB provide. It is such a gift to know there is such light and love still permeating the earth. Happy Valentine’s Day to you both. Xx H🌷
This is like a morning prayer to be uttered and honored daily. A beautiful and loving ode with so much honor infused. I so appreciate the lift both you and JB provide. It is such a gift to know there is such light and love still permeating the earth. Happy Valentine’s Day to you both. Xx H🌷
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14th Feb 2020 5:48pm
Thank you, Honoria! That is a lovely thing to say, and always nice to know that you contribute to someone's happiness in some small way. And even more of a blessing that they let you know.
I hope your Valentine's Day is blessed with the love and support you deserve! ❤
I hope your Valentine's Day is blessed with the love and support you deserve! ❤
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14th Feb 2020 2:14pm
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14th Feb 2020 5:46pm
Thank you so much, Slip! I love that metaphor! I hope your Valentine's Day is blessed with much love and poetry! ❤
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14th Feb 2020 4:05pm
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14th Feb 2020 5:46pm
Yes they do, Nikki! All the way around! I hope your Valentine's Day is blessed with much love and happiness! ❤❤❤
My Chosen Valentine
14th Feb 2020 7:45pm
This is, indeed, a gift for Valentine's Day, Ahavati!
The most powerful thought is the CHOOSING. We must choose to love because only voluntary love can be genuine. Moreover, we must love DESPITE, because that is the power of love -- that's how it becomes unconditional.
Just recompense is guaranteed, you suggest, because when we empty ourselves of goodness for the sake of others, we compel "the latter rain" to fill us back with the harvest.
A beautiful notion.
Sincerely
cab
The most powerful thought is the CHOOSING. We must choose to love because only voluntary love can be genuine. Moreover, we must love DESPITE, because that is the power of love -- that's how it becomes unconditional.
Just recompense is guaranteed, you suggest, because when we empty ourselves of goodness for the sake of others, we compel "the latter rain" to fill us back with the harvest.
A beautiful notion.
Sincerely
cab
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14th Feb 2020 8:15pm
Thank you, Cab!
That you received the essence is truly a blessing indeed, and a great gift for me.
I love what you said about the latter rain; it, along with rain, is so symbolic of fertilization. A seed cannot survive without them. A harvest doesn't last forever; it's reaped until the field is empty—same with our hearts. If the love doesn't flow out it stagnates and rots at the root: the waters become bitter. What the do we have to offer others except bitterness?
Love must flow outward for fresh seeds, rain, and sun to propagate the soil once again.
Thank you for a wonderful comment and Happiest of Valentine's Days to you and your wife!
That you received the essence is truly a blessing indeed, and a great gift for me.
I love what you said about the latter rain; it, along with rain, is so symbolic of fertilization. A seed cannot survive without them. A harvest doesn't last forever; it's reaped until the field is empty—same with our hearts. If the love doesn't flow out it stagnates and rots at the root: the waters become bitter. What the do we have to offer others except bitterness?
Love must flow outward for fresh seeds, rain, and sun to propagate the soil once again.
Thank you for a wonderful comment and Happiest of Valentine's Days to you and your wife!
Re. My Chosen Valentine
14th Feb 2020 10:37pm
You and Johnny are on a roll of delivering intricate pieces. It's wonderful when writers praise and raise each other that way.
Well done.
Well done.
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15th Feb 2020 1:22pm
Thank you, Wally. It's wonderful to have someone you love and trust in your corner. I'm sure you understand perfectly. 💕
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15th Feb 2020 4:43am
I love the title of this because it implies that love is a choice and not just a random event that is cliche'd. It's important to choose a Valentine wisely as someone who is worthy. You cant love them until you love yourself first by being true to yourself. The garden only grows if it's tended. I like this Valentine's wisdom..
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15th Feb 2020 1:28pm
Indeed, PR. We're gonna get knocked about and experience rough patches in life: drought, flood, and locusts, tec. But, we must get back up and choose Love, no matter what.
Thank you. I hope your day was lovely! ❤
Thank you. I hope your day was lovely! ❤
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15th Feb 2020 6:54pm
Universal love yayy wow this is an impressive tribute to love and muse, inspiring as well. I love the word coffer it fits in superbly with your thoughts. Kudos. Did I already wish u happy Valentine's Day dear? 🌷👏🏻👌🏼
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15th Feb 2020 7:20pm
Thank you, Zynab! It was a lovely, relaxing day indeed! But then everyday can be with love! I appreciate your thoughts! <3
Re. My Chosen Valentine
16th Feb 2020 2:23pm
Dear Ahavati,
Your poetry is full of deep meaning. Give without being reserved, and generously, then fill yourself with tranquility, and universal love. Great poetry, Ahavati.
Your poetry is full of deep meaning. Give without being reserved, and generously, then fill yourself with tranquility, and universal love. Great poetry, Ahavati.
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16th Feb 2020 2:29pm
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16th Feb 2020 2:24pm
Aaawww dear, sooooooo B-U-TEE- FULL!!
👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾 N hope ur V-Day was super sweet for u 😊
👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾 N hope ur V-Day was super sweet for u 😊
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16th Feb 2020 2:30pm
It was very sweet and peaceful, PoeticOne! I hope yours was—so nice to see you back around. Been missing some of the oldies lately.
Thank you, my friend.
Thank you, my friend.
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16th Feb 2020 3:46pm
Seriously I know I’ve been very infrequent lately, n it’s NOT becuz I don’t wanna be here, just life getting in the way far more than ever... but I treasure you lady ❤️😊
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16th Feb 2020 3:52pm
Totally understand, PoeticOne. Mine is about to get that way as well. Good to see you whenever you can grace us!
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17th Feb 2020 2:17am
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19th Feb 2020 8:46am
"Balance is the footpath of Universal Love" I love how you ended this. Great read.
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19th Feb 2020 3:05pm
wow great write.
22nd Feb 2020 1:22pm
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22nd Feb 2020 1:24pm
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22nd Feb 2020 1:26pm
Haha I know but I’m expecting good things in March. Even though February is my birthday month be gone lol.
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22nd Feb 2020 1:28pm
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24th Feb 2020 4:31pm
Re. My Chosen Valentine
24th Feb 2020 3:38pm
This is beautiful.
It's often a challenge to reveal oneself, even in a spirit of love.
It's often a challenge to reveal oneself, even in a spirit of love.
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24th Feb 2020 4:02pm
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27th Feb 2020 3:07pm
Thanks, Didi! Much appreciated. I think we all lose our balance at times; thank goodness we can recover!