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The Poetry of Rain
I’ve always loved the poetry of rain
As such a force of nature I could feel,
In flow of alley creeks, a distant train,
A way of life and loss it would reveal.
I’d run to classes Monday in a storm,
I’ve always loved the poetry of rain.
At night a cold in bed is safe & warm,
One corner of the ceiling with a stain.
I was a tempest toss’d that never came,
Instead, direction was within my pen.
I’ve always loved the poetry of rain,
To never stop, not if I live again.
Today the southland winter sun is gone
To overcast an evening on the wane.
In fact I feel a po’em coming on,
I’ve always loved the poetry of rain.
Written by
Jade-Pandora
(jade tiger)
Published 27th Jan 2020
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Re. The Poetry of Rain
27th Jan 2020 1:30am
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27th Jan 2020 1:43am
Re. The Poetry of Rain
27th Jan 2020 1:42am
I love the rain so mellowing to the spiritual soul touching the heart nicely done...dear poetess
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Re: Re. The Poetry of Rain
27th Jan 2020 1:46am
Thank you, brother Stoney, you are a blessing, with a generous heart.
be well always
🙏🏻
be well always
🙏🏻
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27th Jan 2020 10:55am
Re. The Poetry of Rain
27th Jan 2020 2:21am
This is really, really beautiful, Jade! You are such an awesome poet! ❤️
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Re: Re. The Poetry of Rain
Omgosh, my dear NewB friend... the honor of your words & RL “add” has me in shivers (which is also due to my glucose...💓)
🐯
🙏🏻
🐯
🙏🏻
Re: Re. The Poetry of Rain
27th Jan 2020 2:53am
Re. The Poetry of Rain
27th Jan 2020 1:33pm
At night a cold in bed is safe & warm,
One corner of the ceiling with a stain.
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very beautiful scene .
i love it ,,, it reached my heart deeply .
be happy
Hussein
One corner of the ceiling with a stain.
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very beautiful scene .
i love it ,,, it reached my heart deeply .
be happy
Hussein
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Re: Re. The Poetry of Rain
27th Jan 2020 2:00pm
A gracious thanks to you, Hussein, for visiting to read and honor the piece with your words.
And may I welcome you to your home here at the Deep.🙏🏻
Jade🌻
And may I welcome you to your home here at the Deep.🙏🏻
Jade🌻
Re. The Poetry of Rain
27th Jan 2020 9:08pm
The sound of rain, when I'm well-sheltered, calms me, brings on a dream state. I love this, Jadey, but Ninja and I are staying dry.
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*gently giggles*
Me too!... move over, Ninja, group hug
( ( ( 🐾 ) ) )
RL gratitude
Me too!... move over, Ninja, group hug
( ( ( 🐾 ) ) )
RL gratitude
Re. The Poetry of Rain
27th Jan 2020 10:06pm
There is something that satisfies my soul when battered by the lashing rain, trudging along in my favourite reliable coat: there are some things that speak to inside us.
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Re: Re. The Poetry of Rain
31st Jan 2020 9:06am
Thank you, dear Viddax, for such descriptive & relatable thoughts where rain takes you.., and for the RL honor.
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Re. The Poetry of Rain
Anonymous
28th Jan 2020 3:07am
As always, your figurative language and flow are really compelling.
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31st Jan 2020 9:10am
Re. The Poetry of Rain
2nd Feb 2020 5:54pm
Loved the last two lines, the poem as if it was a storm coming. Brilliant.
Good luck in the comp Ms. Jade.
Good luck in the comp Ms. Jade.
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2nd Feb 2020 7:06pm