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Unfolding the Fabric of the Universe
In the known universe...
There are billions of galaxies...
Which are made up of billions of stars...
Some of these stars, suns as we call them, make up solar systems...
Which contain planets...
Which are made up of dust and rock...
One of these planets has water...
This water formed great oceans...
In which life came to be...
Billions of years later...
In the water, swims a whale...
Inside of the whale is a fish...
Inside the fish is another smaller fish...
With a parasitic worm inside its body...
A scientist in a lab somewhere
dissects a similar fish and extracts the parasite...
Inside the parasite are organs...
Which are made up of tissues...
Which are made up cells...
These cells are composed of organelles...
One of these organelles is the nucleus...
The nucleus contains chromosomes...
And they are made up of chromatids...
Which are made up of histones...
Which form the DNA strands...
Which are further made of nucleotides...
The nucleotides are made of molecular compounds...
Which are made of molecules...
Which are then comprised of atoms...
Atoms contain protons and neutrons...
Which are made up of quarks...
There are 6 types of quarks...
These types are known as flavours...
The flavours are...
up, down, top, bottom...
strange, and charm...
The quarks are held together by gluons...
Gluons are force-carrying particles...
Which are made of "Energy"...
Beyond this Energy remains a great mystery!
You have just witnessed a dramatic...
Unfolding of the fabric...
of our amazingly complex universe!
There are billions of galaxies...
Which are made up of billions of stars...
Some of these stars, suns as we call them, make up solar systems...
Which contain planets...
Which are made up of dust and rock...
One of these planets has water...
This water formed great oceans...
In which life came to be...
Billions of years later...
In the water, swims a whale...
Inside of the whale is a fish...
Inside the fish is another smaller fish...
With a parasitic worm inside its body...
A scientist in a lab somewhere
dissects a similar fish and extracts the parasite...
Inside the parasite are organs...
Which are made up of tissues...
Which are made up cells...
These cells are composed of organelles...
One of these organelles is the nucleus...
The nucleus contains chromosomes...
And they are made up of chromatids...
Which are made up of histones...
Which form the DNA strands...
Which are further made of nucleotides...
The nucleotides are made of molecular compounds...
Which are made of molecules...
Which are then comprised of atoms...
Atoms contain protons and neutrons...
Which are made up of quarks...
There are 6 types of quarks...
These types are known as flavours...
The flavours are...
up, down, top, bottom...
strange, and charm...
The quarks are held together by gluons...
Gluons are force-carrying particles...
Which are made of "Energy"...
Beyond this Energy remains a great mystery!
You have just witnessed a dramatic...
Unfolding of the fabric...
of our amazingly complex universe!
Author's Note
And don't even get me started on the idea of multiverses and spiritual realms! That's a story for a different day!
Not really a poem, but so what, it was fun! :)
Not really a poem, but so what, it was fun! :)
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Re. Unfolding the Fabric of the Universe
9th Jan 2020 10:41am
Yes! Super write. What is there after we have measured all we can measure.
Psst...multiverses are real...
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Psst...multiverses are real...
hugs,
buddhakitty.
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Re: Re. Unfolding the Fabric of the Universe
9th Jan 2020 7:09pm
Heh, thank you, buddha! So glad that you liked it :)
It's not exactly a poem, but more of a journey of thought, I suppose. Who knows what's beyond our knowledge...
The universe seems to be infinitely complex... A fractal of sorts. It is just amazing to think about sometimes!
It's not exactly a poem, but more of a journey of thought, I suppose. Who knows what's beyond our knowledge...
The universe seems to be infinitely complex... A fractal of sorts. It is just amazing to think about sometimes!
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9th Jan 2020 11:24am
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9th Jan 2020 7:51pm
Re. Unfolding the Fabric of the Universe
9th Jan 2020 11:29am
I feel I've just had a science lesson👍
Indeed, theres genius in your write, as well as the universe
How on earth you can remember all of that is outstanding
Personally, I can remember my name, but get lax on birthdays 👍
Indeed, theres genius in your write, as well as the universe
How on earth you can remember all of that is outstanding
Personally, I can remember my name, but get lax on birthdays 👍
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Re: Re. Unfolding the Fabric of the Universe
9th Jan 2020 8:03pm
Lol. You're welcome! I'm so glad that you enjoyed it!
I really appreciate your kind words, as well as your humor 😁
You're awesome, Serenity!
I really appreciate your kind words, as well as your humor 😁
You're awesome, Serenity!
Re. Unfolding the Fabric of the Universe
I actually ran away from science at school and opted for commercial studies instead
... and I don't regret that decision at all, lol.
And this is just the complexity of the known universe? What about the unseen? The undiscovered? The unknown?
Still too much sciencey, hehehe
Lovely lesson though and I see why it was such fun trying to decipher it all♥
... and I don't regret that decision at all, lol.
And this is just the complexity of the known universe? What about the unseen? The undiscovered? The unknown?
Still too much sciencey, hehehe
Lovely lesson though and I see why it was such fun trying to decipher it all♥
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Re: Re. Unfolding the Fabric of the Universe
Heh, NuBorn... I suppose everyone has their own 'niche' in life 😊
I appreciate your continued readership and your kind words. Thank you ❤️
I appreciate your continued readership and your kind words. Thank you ❤️
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9th Jan 2020 12:06pm
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Re. Unfolding the Fabric of the Universe
9th Jan 2020 3:52pm
Dear NB,
It's a beautiful poem that summarizes the scientific approach of creation.
It's a beautiful poem that summarizes the scientific approach of creation.
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Re: Re. Unfolding the Fabric of the Universe
9th Jan 2020 10:53pm
Thank you, Joseph, I appreciate you stopping by. Thank you kindly for your nice compliment!
That is correct. I know there are discrepancies with the Bible here... I even considered leaving the billions of years part out to avoid turning away Christians, as I know many here, and I wanted everyone to be able to enjoy. I grew up in a Christian household, but I have a degree in Biology, so I have had to adjust my beliefs accordingly in order to avoid great amounts of cognitive dissonance. Nonetheless, I remain a very spiritual person, and have found what I consider a happy medium between religiosity, science, and spirituality :)
Anyway, best wishes to you, and thanks again for your continued readership!
- NewB
That is correct. I know there are discrepancies with the Bible here... I even considered leaving the billions of years part out to avoid turning away Christians, as I know many here, and I wanted everyone to be able to enjoy. I grew up in a Christian household, but I have a degree in Biology, so I have had to adjust my beliefs accordingly in order to avoid great amounts of cognitive dissonance. Nonetheless, I remain a very spiritual person, and have found what I consider a happy medium between religiosity, science, and spirituality :)
Anyway, best wishes to you, and thanks again for your continued readership!
- NewB
Re: Re. Unfolding the Fabric of the Universe
9th Jan 2020 11:05pm
Indeed, you are very kind. I am very glad that you are a believer in Christianity. It gives you great relief and tranquility because l feel you are a very sensitive person. I felt that in your poetry. I am very happy to have a strong friendship with you.
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Re. Unfolding the Fabric of the Universe
9th Jan 2020 7:05pm
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Precisely! It really makes you think... it's quite incredible, really :)
Thanks for stopping by again, Tim - I truly appreciate you!
Thanks for stopping by again, Tim - I truly appreciate you!
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9th Jan 2020 9:32pm
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10th Jan 2020 1:30am
That is so true, Daniel. Being in a science field certainly expanded my perspective... I will never be the same, heh.
Thanks so much for stopping by to read and comment... It means a lot!
Thanks so much for stopping by to read and comment... It means a lot!
Re. Unfolding the Fabric of the Universe
9th Jan 2020 10:25pm
We are made from rock
Dust to dust my friend ..
Very profound just wonderful NB
Listed for sure oh! I love anything planetary ❤️
Well done man 👍🏻
Pen love
Zazzles xx
Dust to dust my friend ..
Very profound just wonderful NB
Listed for sure oh! I love anything planetary ❤️
Well done man 👍🏻
Pen love
Zazzles xx
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Re: Re. Unfolding the Fabric of the Universe
10th Jan 2020 5:47am
Thank you, Zazzles! You're sweet :)
So nice of you to drop by! Glad you liked it, and I appreciate the RL!
So nice of you to drop by! Glad you liked it, and I appreciate the RL!
Re. Unfolding the Fabric of the Universe
Anonymous
9th Jan 2020 10:49pm
I'm so glad to know that you and I speak the same "language". 🙂
You have no idea how happy it made me to read these words right now. ❤
You're the best, NB!
You have no idea how happy it made me to read these words right now. ❤
You're the best, NB!
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Re: Re. Unfolding the Fabric of the Universe
10th Jan 2020 5:49am
Thank you so much, Scribbles! It's good to have people on here who speak your language, you know? :)
Thanks for stopping by again!
Thanks for stopping by again!
Re. Unfolding the Fabric of the Universe
10th Jan 2020 4:35am
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10th Jan 2020 5:50am
Hey jonny,
Thanks so much for stopping by my page to read and comment. Glad you liked this :)
Thanks so much for stopping by my page to read and comment. Glad you liked this :)
Re. Unfolding the Fabric of the Universe
10th Jan 2020 11:52am
Aren't we all connected to it. We are it. If we didn't exsist I think the universe would be non existent. Thoughts manifested.
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Re: Re. Unfolding the Fabric of the Universe
14th Jan 2020 3:58pm
Thanks for that existential and beautiful truth - thank you for the readership and comments :)
Re. Unfolding the Fabric of the Universe
This was not only well written and informative, but is was FUN to read (and hell yes itsa poem ;p )
Nice job as always, i may have actually learned a thing or to (that FYI, I will likely forget soon lol)
Thank for sharing!!
Oh yeah, so do you by chance have any thoughts on multiverses ?
Spiritual realms maybe? :) :)
Nice job as always, i may have actually learned a thing or to (that FYI, I will likely forget soon lol)
Thank for sharing!!
Oh yeah, so do you by chance have any thoughts on multiverses ?
Spiritual realms maybe? :) :)
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