Butterfly Kisses & Rosebud Wishes...

And you say you wanna grow up to be like me...whatever, girl. If I had the skill with the quill you do with these little delicacies...sweet cats...You never disappoint!

Thanks chickie. We're both pretty epic. They say you always want whatcha don't got.;) 🍃

Thank you. I'm so glad it portrayed itself well, I'll take exquisite any day!!

Dear Pandy, this is a ,masterpiece! I love your language use and your metaphors are so sensually illustrative of the real thing. Damn! That last stanza is so deliciously sensual...tingles with every read...and I read it over and over. Bravisima!

Thank you, Mr. Now read it again. *wink*
I'm pretty happy with it considering the muse never really thought about it, it just cum like that! 💥 Glad that last stanza worked on you....
Thank you for the praise & add, you're so dear!

Yes mistress! I'll read it till you say "STOP!" Ha ha! I am glad it came like that...tingles just writing that...and some moisture. You are dearer.

wonderful dance of euphemisms....titillating verse...

Thank you graciously, Lawrence. I love the land of metaphors & euphanisms!

Damn that's so fun to read!!
Love the imagery and your word selection is amazing
Right from the beginning it's like holy shit
"As butterflies dance from belly to bud, the flitter flutter within pink velveteen's niche grabs his quickening quiver  
My ripened froth kisses each rigid pivot to glide ripples tide and rivet in the torrent of fresh fragrant rains "
That's impressive and so beautifully penned!
Excellent write 👏🙌🙌

Omg.. I don't know if I've ever gotten you with an erotic piece before,  Hunter. All smiles it was add worthy, but more importantly, it got a holy shit from you. 😄Thank you bunches, buddy!!!

Echo BCPoet, I too enjoy the extensive use of euphemisms. Paints a sensuous picture.

Thank you, Solomon. I was pretty happy with how it flowed & I'm glad you enjoyed it. Idk what I'd do without my euphemisms & metaphors, besides just not write.

The opening sentence, 'As butterflies dance from belly to bud'....got me right into it and wanting to follow the read through. (Thinking literally it brought mental picture of a woman sunbathing nude during butterfly season). I think this might inspire a poem from me...

I surely hope it brought about some inspiration, that's always a plus. I look forward to seeing your endeavors if so. You & nude sunbathing?... I'd have never thought you'd write such a thing.😉😄🌝

Posted it.

such a juicy write you naughty girl love it  

I always bow at your appreciation, D. Thank you bunches!

I know you you haven't  classed this as an erotic write...but damn!!!   It was so sensual from the start.   That first line said it all..." As butterflies dance from  belly to bud"... How could  those few words not turn into a Pandy Masterpiece?!   Your progression amazes me.    I'm not great at critique...but I can see when writer's  break through the wall into excellence.  You just did!!

Hell yes, it did! I didn't even have to really think on it was what thrilled me most! The subtle rhymes & all. I had a dispute with the muse over using clit instead of bud to pair with quickening quiver. I nearly marked it as dirty because of clit 🤣...and said, Oh hell no, can't do that. I'm such a word prude now.

Thank you for an awesome review, I brought out the critiquer within @ that shithole .."building blocks", David.;) You have a voice to roar with so roar! You know how to because you're a natural born poet! Huge Pandy hugs.💞

beautiful Pandora such a gorgeous erotic
you are a beautifully passionate lady brimming with sensuality
and it shows in your writes...

love you lady...

love Brenda 🌹❤🌹

Thank you for the kindness you always bestow on me, lovely one. I appreciate you beyond words & love ya to the moon & back! 💞

My last of three reads confirmed what my first read told me that this is a masterpiece of sensuality. As a man your metaphors for the velveteen niche grabbing quickening quiver followed by rosebud wishes wrap his flickering need took me on a magic trip into what males feel when at the “hilt”. You are the goddess of erotic expression whose verse is the stuff of the God’s delight. You riveted me with a plethora of rosebud. Wishes right down to the core of my masculinity. XoXoXo John

I absolutely love you showing up to feed my ego, John! It's my pleasure to take your masculinity on trips & dips to the hilt.  I always call herseykiss the Queen of erotica on these pages, so I'll gladly take Goddess. I appreciate your wonderful words of encouragement.

........ Your very own forever fan! Xo

Haha, splendid words Pandora. I cannot overstate this almost seemingly effortless first grade write on your part. And I'm gonna take you at your word, innocently. Liquid relief indeed. Mine's a pint of Fosters ok mate? What are butterfly kisses exactly, are they easy to explain? Please don't tell me I'll know when I get them cos I may be waiting a while! ;-)

"First grade write"  gets you brownie points  & a Fosters.🍺 I figured liquor when you said pint, but you're across the sea & all I could pull up was lager. Well, my butterfly kisses far surpass that mere & silly kissing of eyelashes... you very well know.;) Thanks for stopping by to give me a big smile & giggles, Billy !!

Yep, liquid refreshment in the form of lager, you got it girl. It's a good place to start, right?  
Build myself up like. ;-)

Cheers, Billy!! 🍻

Wow.  Sensually rich from start to finish.  That write must have felt good.

Thanks buddy. Yes, it actually did feel good to release this spill.  No NaPo today for you though( well yesterday at least)?!😮

Thank you every kindly for such an amazing comment, my new friend! For once in a long time, I can actually say this one came effortlessly! Shew, felt good too! 🌝💥

Wow! What an imagination. Loved it Ma'm. I really did enjoy reading this. It reminded me that nature has so much the poet is able to tap into when it comes to creating a word picture. And also your words that a poem doesn't need the same rhyming words. Thanks you again.💞

Thank you, dearie. It took me quite awhile & going through many different styles to end up here. Every writer will be different & as time goes by, you'll find your comfort zone. Indeed, nature & sex go hand in hand if you truly think about it. That's why I use it so often by use of metaphors; esp flowers, ocean, rain, and even our cosmos above us! I'm glad you enjoyed it & I appreciate it muchly that you added it as well.

Such beauty, tenderness, and sensuality. Wonderful, Pandora! 😊❤️

Thank you so much, NB! Your add & comment brightened my first day returning to the site! I'll need to make so, so many rounds for sure! ...appreciated muchly,  Pandy.

It's great to have you back, Pandora. Your presence is valued on these fronts... I assure you that :)

I, myself, have been absent lately, but here I am again. It's good to see you here as well 😊

Welcome back to you as well then! May we keep the fires stoked!🥂

If this kind of well inked magnificence is what comes to mind when women receive flowers, I now understand why some women crave this specific gift so very much
This is sensual and erotic

Thank you so very much for your kindness. Forgive me for taking such a long time reply, I need to fix my absences. I'm truly indebted!