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WAKE UP CALL
With feline stealth
She climbs on top of his sleeping form
Draping her naked body over his,
like a safari trophy rug
Head pointing towards his feet
Her erect and swollen nipples
Graze his stomach as she inches toward her prize
She playfully caresses his furry seed sacs
Taking the low hanging fruit into her mouth
They seemingly ripen as she runs her tongue over each
She hungrily begins to lick his withered stalk
As if feeling the rays of the sun
It begins to rise to bask in her heat
She envelopes his fleshy rod between ruby lips
And swallows him whole
He awakens to a luscious, fragrant scene
Appearing as the first flower of Spring
peaking between two pure white mounds of snow
He touches the dark pink blossom
It melts with every gentle stroke
Now feeling his tongue licking her bud and his fingers probing her inner sanctum
Her breath quickens with the crescendo of her moans
Like gears meshing together
Their synchronous pleasuring
Drives this engine of ecstasy faster and faster
He can feel her torso convulse as she reaches paradise
She continues to work his pump
With a guttural cry and a shudder the gears grind to a halt
As he quenches her primal thirst with his hot, precious stream
She turns to face him and quietly whisper "good morning."
Originally posted in June 2013
She climbs on top of his sleeping form
Draping her naked body over his,
like a safari trophy rug
Head pointing towards his feet
Her erect and swollen nipples
Graze his stomach as she inches toward her prize
She playfully caresses his furry seed sacs
Taking the low hanging fruit into her mouth
They seemingly ripen as she runs her tongue over each
She hungrily begins to lick his withered stalk
As if feeling the rays of the sun
It begins to rise to bask in her heat
She envelopes his fleshy rod between ruby lips
And swallows him whole
He awakens to a luscious, fragrant scene
Appearing as the first flower of Spring
peaking between two pure white mounds of snow
He touches the dark pink blossom
It melts with every gentle stroke
Now feeling his tongue licking her bud and his fingers probing her inner sanctum
Her breath quickens with the crescendo of her moans
Like gears meshing together
Their synchronous pleasuring
Drives this engine of ecstasy faster and faster
He can feel her torso convulse as she reaches paradise
She continues to work his pump
With a guttural cry and a shudder the gears grind to a halt
As he quenches her primal thirst with his hot, precious stream
She turns to face him and quietly whisper "good morning."
Originally posted in June 2013
Published 18th Oct 2019
| Edited 7th Jul 2020
Author's Note
A good friend and poet made me remember this piece.
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Anonymous
- Edited 8th May 2020 8:45pm
18th Oct 2019 4:16pm
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18th Oct 2019 5:09pm
Thank you so much, Hrshykss! Definitely a favorite time of day pour amour sadly the interludes are rare and spaced out over much greater lengths of time. I sincerely appreciate your comment and especially from a poet so talented in this genre...you are an erotic goddess.
Anonymous
- Edited 29th Apr 2020 5:45pm
30th Oct 2019 11:51am
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Anonymous
7th Jul 2020 11:15pm
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8th Jul 2020 00:05am
Mmmmmmm I am glad😘 I love your new profile pic. It fits our conversation so well. BTW, I've been told I look quite a bit like the dude in my profile pic .
Anonymous
8th Jul 2020 00:08am
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7th Jan 2021 8:23am
It really is one of the best feelings, to service and swallow one another simultaneously.... Fuck yes.
It covers all the boxes on your want list. Intimate, sexy, dirty, erotic, a tinge taboo, and just so accessible... It's in my 🔝 5, without a doubt....
💜 😉 💜
xoxo
It covers all the boxes on your want list. Intimate, sexy, dirty, erotic, a tinge taboo, and just so accessible... It's in my 🔝 5, without a doubt....
💜 😉 💜
xoxo
7th Jan 2021 8:32am
I love love love that you appreciate this brand of intimacy and just plain ecstasy and fun. This would definitely help ease the pain of yesterday's shameful Capitol violence. Makes one want to just cuddle up all day and let love-making be the freedom enjoyed.
7th Jan 2021 8:40am
Nothing but two naked bodies, repeated and various pleasures, snuggles, giggling, those long talks that lead to more pleasure and only when sated to the point of light headedness, sustenance delivered via uber because that would be the only break from the bed itself..... hahaha...
Yes! ✨💫✨💫✨💫
Yes! ✨💫✨💫✨💫
7th Jan 2021 8:49am
