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Love is
broken in Spirit
but not faith: their
trunks carved by Life
yet, places no blame
upon the hand
wielding the knife;
dry-furrowed Souls
who continue to believe:
despite unrequited efforts
they'll never understand—
though carry on
until their backs bleed;
a combatant fighter
using defensive maneuvers
to shield unhealed scars
from future wounds—
offering nonetheless
themselves unto service
whenever called upon;
doesn't try to bury
the hurt from remembering—
sits with it quietly instead
learning the lesson it taught
until free to move on
Love is endurance—
ceasing without end
even unto death
its capacity to give
despite circumstance
~
but not faith: their
trunks carved by Life
yet, places no blame
upon the hand
wielding the knife;
dry-furrowed Souls
who continue to believe:
despite unrequited efforts
they'll never understand—
though carry on
until their backs bleed;
a combatant fighter
using defensive maneuvers
to shield unhealed scars
from future wounds—
offering nonetheless
themselves unto service
whenever called upon;
doesn't try to bury
the hurt from remembering—
sits with it quietly instead
learning the lesson it taught
until free to move on
Love is endurance—
ceasing without end
even unto death
its capacity to give
despite circumstance
~
Written by
Ahavati
(Tams)
Published 5th Sep 2019
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Re. Love is
5th Sep 2019 12:27pm
Like the universe, love is eternal in one form or another. Super write Ahvanti.
luv's
buddhakitty.
luv's
buddhakitty.
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Re: Re. Love is
15th Sep 2019 5:08pm
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Re: Re. Love is
15th Sep 2019 5:09pm
That is a wondrous comment, BB. I am truly humbled by that.
Thank you, my friend. xo.
Thank you, my friend. xo.
Re. Love is
5th Sep 2019 12:49pm
Your talent shine like a beacon in this amazing spill. I tip my hat miss
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15th Sep 2019 5:09pm
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5th Sep 2019 4:03pm
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15th Sep 2019 5:10pm
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Re: Re. Love is
15th Sep 2019 5:10pm
Re. Love is
5th Sep 2019 6:01pm
Yeah it is
Love is the Glue & Fugative Glue.........
the universal eternal that interconnects us all with sentient life, spiritual and every dispensation.
incredible aware spill
Love is the Glue & Fugative Glue.........
the universal eternal that interconnects us all with sentient life, spiritual and every dispensation.
incredible aware spill
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Re: Re. Love is
15th Sep 2019 5:11pm
Exactly right, my friend. Just as the space between words and music binds them together, thus the unseen world binds us.
I appreciate you, my friend. xo
I appreciate you, my friend. xo
Re. Love is
5th Sep 2019 6:55pm
Dear A,
This made me feel as though I was sitting quietly being blanketed and soothed for all the sorrow experienced. I could hear such a gentle and forgiving timbred voice speaking this piece.
Beautiful Write! H🌷
This made me feel as though I was sitting quietly being blanketed and soothed for all the sorrow experienced. I could hear such a gentle and forgiving timbred voice speaking this piece.
Beautiful Write! H🌷
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Re: Re. Love is
15th Sep 2019 5:12pm
Thank you, Honoria. Your observation and interpretation are deeply appreciated. xo
Re. Love is
Anonymous
5th Sep 2019 10:46pm
Only you could write a poem this beautiful after waking up on the morning of an approaching hurricane.
If I could suggest a anything, I would change knife to chainsaw, for the lead stanza I immediately associated with chainsaw art competitions.
Regardless, the message is pure and perfect.
❤📝
If I could suggest a anything, I would change knife to chainsaw, for the lead stanza I immediately associated with chainsaw art competitions.
Regardless, the message is pure and perfect.
❤📝
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Re: Re. Love is
15th Sep 2019 5:13pm
LOL! Thank goodness Dorian decided to remain close to the shore vs visiting inland full force!
Thank you, Sweetie! Always appreciate your love and support, but gotta say no to the chainsaw recommendation! LOL!
❤📝
Thank you, Sweetie! Always appreciate your love and support, but gotta say no to the chainsaw recommendation! LOL!
❤📝
Re. Love is
5th Sep 2019 11:32pm
This is a powerful and poignant poem Ahavati. I tend to agree with Massimo Pigliucci when he talks about ancient Greek philosophy, it's a shame that we modernists have only one word for love and perhaps we should teach our children all the "older meanings" as well...Agape...Eros...Philia...and the little known about Storge. Must read your wonderful poem one more time my friend.
Cheers...and philia...Harry
Cheers...and philia...Harry
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Re: Re. Love is
15th Sep 2019 5:19pm
Thank you, Harry, my friend. I completely agree that the western culture seems to tunnel vision most concepts - particularly those of love. As a matter of fact, we never had philosophy in high school, which I feel is a grand mistake. I take advantage of my time with my grandson to instill in him what I was never taught at that age.
I appreciate you muchly!
I appreciate you muchly!
Re: Re. Love is
15th Sep 2019 5:20pm
Re. Love is
7th Sep 2019 10:38am
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15th Sep 2019 5:20pm
Re. Love is
7th Sep 2019 4:25pm
I don't have the words to praise this piece. I'll just come back to it and read it over and over again
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Re: Re. Love is
15th Sep 2019 5:21pm
That is one of the highest compliments ever, Wally. So thank you, my friend. Much appreciated.
Re. Love is
9th Sep 2019 1:11am
You’re nobody till somebody loves you.
This poem is solid gold. (:
Your friend,
LostGirl
This poem is solid gold. (:
Your friend,
LostGirl
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Re: Re. Love is
15th Sep 2019 5:21pm
Quite right, LG!
Thank you for your love and support, much appreciated, my friend. xo
Thank you for your love and support, much appreciated, my friend. xo
Re: Re. Love is
15th Sep 2019 8:31pm
Love is also a BASEBALL BAT to your groin if you so much as PISS me off, motherfucker!
But we'll dissect that notion in your next poem. (;
Your friend,
Losty
(;
But we'll dissect that notion in your next poem. (;
Your friend,
Losty
(;
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Re. Love is
27th Sep 2019 5:41pm
Love is the most powerful thing we know. Even when we have been badly burned, most of us still go back for more, hoping it will be different next time - and if we are lucky, it is.
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Re: Re. Love is
27th Sep 2019 6:29pm
That depends on whether or not we learn from the previous relationship, or we continue to repeat the same patterns, Silver Birch. Over the years I have become a firm believer in letting go gracefully and letting live.
"Whatever comes, let it come.
Whatever goes, let it go."
It is only our own expectation that disrupts the natural flow of Love. It's a difficult lesson to master, indeed. But, it can be mastered nonetheless over time and experience.
Thank you for your comments.
"Whatever comes, let it come.
Whatever goes, let it go."
It is only our own expectation that disrupts the natural flow of Love. It's a difficult lesson to master, indeed. But, it can be mastered nonetheless over time and experience.
Thank you for your comments.
Re. Love is
We all need love, even if sometimes we think we can live without it. A super write! (Yes, I know I've already read and commented)
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Re: Re. Love is
6th Oct 2019 7:43pm
Re. Love is
21st Oct 2019 1:05am
Love that final stanza. I also like that there is a real comparison here between love and violence. Not that violence in relationships should be considered love, but that the act of loving is, in a sense, an act of violence, particularly when we have to re enter the fray after injury. I’ve had this on my mind a lot lately, ever since I read A Farewell to Arms last summer. My poem “Tenente in Confidence” is kind of about that.
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Re: Re. Love is
21st Oct 2019 1:09am