Now and not then.

Yes; EXACTLY.  Until you get it right.

That's the beauty of life - so much to experience - so many choices - none of which are ever wrong, only a learning curve.

Well done, LG.

Thank you for the RL add, Wise One.

In this thing we call life..

floating aimlessly..

your continuous support makes it all worthwhile. (:

Your friend and fellow drifter,
LostGirl

LG, your writing is amazing you pen is gifted. Im so glad i got to read your words. I hope many more to come.

Sweet, lovely Liam,

You never fail me with your kind praise. (:

Thank you dear friend.

Yours,
LostGirl

Fantastic spill, this, Beautiful

There will be life(times) lives to get it right
for love, intimate spiritual love
is eternal

You’re beautiful, Tallen. (:

I hope one of these lifetimes, we get it right.

Yours,
LostGirl

I am truly humbled.

Thank you, dearest V, for such a wonderful compliment,

(:

Yours,
LostGirl

This is a masterpiece.  The confidence of the direct voice works so powerfully in this piece.  Although, I'm certain it is intended for a specific person, that approach has an uncanny way of making the reader wonder if you are in fact someone from the distant past.  Remarkable ink!

A masterpiece, darling?

Well, my sincerest thank you!

You know exactly what to say to make a poetess blush. (;

Your friend,
LostGirl

Spoken like the everlasting fountain of knowledge you are dearest, Ethan.

25 years young and very, very wise. (:

Your friend (always),
LostGirl

Wow! Wow!! Wow!!! Wow!!! Such an amazing piece!! Could this be for someone in particular!?! I hope he reads this and feels the feeling you have for him in this piece and make the words of this piece jump off the page!!

Thanks for sharing!!
Irv

4  whole “WOW’S!!”

I may just have to skip all my way home. (;

Than you my lovely, Irv.

Your comments are a true treasure to read.

Your friend,
LostGirl

My pleasure!! Looking forward to your next piece!

Keep them coming!
Irv

"Lying there topless while you read to me." Vivid imagery. Real,  genuine and sensual along with the pain of anticipation and longing. Bullseye LG.

luv's
buddhakitty .

A burning desire, indeed, dearest kitty kat.

It paws at my greatly.

Lovely for you to give such warm feedback.

Purring, loudly. (:

Your friend,
LostGirl

An invitation for exploration, total exhilaration of the highest stimulation...knowing creations mental deliberation on causations affect on the rest, but we expand the best of the best as ever test is put to rest!!!!Yeah, like that!

Total exhilaration, indeed.

Brace for impact.. the storm is coming.

Thanks, Mr. Lover.

You know its.. just like that between us. (;

Yours,
LostGirl

This is truly amazing

You, darling, are one of my oldest most treasured friends.

Thank you for finding your way back to me.

Yours,
LostGirl

And the  question arose what shall we do next.  We’er rich no one can stop us. No one can turn us away. But don’t you fear, is it not present in your breast. No I destroy it in the beginning. It does not prick me. My breast are uncovered forever more.  
You always inspire me  
Ur Awesomeness  
Excellent Pen  
I feel it coming  
The sequel  
 But than is all a sequel

To inspire with our words..

what a thrill we get..

up and down..

our sword.. our pen .. our weapon.. here we stand..in poet's land.. irate..the canvas - an open flame.

Thank you, darling.

Your praise is warmly received. (:

Your friend in the woods,

LostGirl

Dear L,

Wow, lucky V.

Intense write. Full of imagery and  determination. H🌷

Dearest H.

V is a lucky boy, isn’t he?

But I’m even luckier that you said so.

Thanks for your kind words, lovely. (:

Yours,
LostGirl

It does read like a letter but a deep one, spelling out your hopes. It has come to the point where he needs to make a decision on where his loyalties lie. You know where yours do. I didn't know Mules were stubborn.
600 days is a long time, over a year in fact & that struck me initially. Is it 600 days since you made 1st contact or since you last spoke?

It’s meant to be a love letter. Good eye, Snaggy one.

600 days until first contact in this life but in previous lives.. who knows? (;

Yours,

LostGirl

Hullo

a lot to like here. a flag raised, a gauntlet thrown. as per with your writings: written and presented to a high standard. like the rest of the above peoples, I look forward to your submissions. good stuff

well done   *hat tip*

I like to throw the gauntlet down. It’s how I roll.

I’m a lucky lady to be in such high favour. (;

Thank you, darling.

Yours,
LostGirl

As Clark Gable says:

“When it's over it's over. No questions, no tears, no farewell kisses.”

All a girl has to leave behind in this lifetime are her love letters, darling.

Next one’s for you Mr. Functional. Sit tight. (;

Yours,
LostGirl

There is a perfect balance of humours in this write which I call Alchemy, a distillation of elements into a pure expression. The voice is clear and direct, emotion is palpable, language is engaging and meter is intense, it's an amazing write and your insights are so powerful.

Daniel -

It is with the fondest warmth I have for you and your brilliant mind that I say thank you, dear friend.

(:

Yours,
LostGirl

I read this...read it again...let the envy that I felt after reading it twice turn into a positive, by which i mean, encourage me to hone my craft just a little more...and with that my dear friend...I bow three times to you and your wonderful piece of poetry.
Much peace...Harry

Oh Harry,

There is no need to to turn pea green with envy, my darling, your love letter is what I’m working on next. (;

Thank you, darling.

Yours,
LostGirl

Now that I'm looking forward to my friend. LOL

beautiful one you're fucking fierce
this is otherworldly eons of love unfold here
manifesting a vibe like no other for your beloved
he's feeling you lady...rock it with those ripples
until he's in your arms once again...

beautiful...

love Brenda ❤

You’ve made my night, gorgeous.

Thank you for the wonderful Kudos.

Lot’s of love your way, lady. 💕

Your friend,
LostGirl

This is breathtaking! Your beautiful words & thoughts came together like art!

Thank you lovely.  (:

You’re a gem of a writer yourself and I appreciate your thoughts.

Yours,
LostGirl

I like your unique writing style. Very creative and it kept my attention.

Why, thank you Inker.

Any attention of yours is a true compliment.  (;

Yours,
LostGirl

*speechless* amazing spill

Thank you gorgeous!

No words necessary, sometimes.

Yours,
LostGirl

I love the spaced out word format that gives it a staccato effect (emphasis).  It was empowering in its speech and uplifting in its tone :)

Staccato.. what a sexy word. (;

Appreciate your read, lovely lady.

Yours,
LostGirl

Your comment is poetry itself, lovely lady!

I believe that kindred spirit is calling..

Now if only fate, destiny or whatever higher force wouldn't take so damn long to bring him to my very doorstep..

But, I digress..

It's wonderful for like souls to cross paths in the DEEP.

Your friend,
Lost One.

(:

There are certain souls that draw to each other, that are love. You paint a desirable picture LG

It wasn't love.

It turned out to be rejection.

The fall was shallow.

Thank you Tim! 😉

Your pal,
Losty

(: