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Dreaming
I'm surrounded by wildflowers
And a sky that's blue
I look into the distance
And am glad to see you're here too
Because this is a safe place
It had been so long
I'd forgotten the sunny look of your face
I pick myself up
Towards you I begin to run
A dark cloud rolls in
And consumes the shining sun
As the sky begins to turn
The life surrounding us
Is beginning to burn
The sky opens up
A downpour ensues
But it cannot help the trees
Scorched at the roots
I scratch, claw, and crawl
To get closer to you
I give it my all
But no matter how fast I run
Or how hard I try
You are out of my reach
Ruled by this invisible divide
This is supposed to be a safe place to be
A place where it is only
You and me
As we continue to fight
Smoke and fire
Are the only things within our sight
Exhausted, I collapse on the ground
The wind whips, the fire crackles
It doesn't make a sound
I cover to protect myself
I finally open my eyes
You are still across the field
It is once again blue skies
And a sky that's blue
I look into the distance
And am glad to see you're here too
Because this is a safe place
It had been so long
I'd forgotten the sunny look of your face
I pick myself up
Towards you I begin to run
A dark cloud rolls in
And consumes the shining sun
As the sky begins to turn
The life surrounding us
Is beginning to burn
The sky opens up
A downpour ensues
But it cannot help the trees
Scorched at the roots
I scratch, claw, and crawl
To get closer to you
I give it my all
But no matter how fast I run
Or how hard I try
You are out of my reach
Ruled by this invisible divide
This is supposed to be a safe place to be
A place where it is only
You and me
As we continue to fight
Smoke and fire
Are the only things within our sight
Exhausted, I collapse on the ground
The wind whips, the fire crackles
It doesn't make a sound
I cover to protect myself
I finally open my eyes
You are still across the field
It is once again blue skies
Author's Note
This is a new version of a poem I wrote when I was seventeen years old. It was a difficult period of time; someone important to me was kept from me for a period of time but we came out on the other side stronger.
I took this picture last winter and thought it was kind of fitting because the sky looks like it's on fire haha
I took this picture last winter and thought it was kind of fitting because the sky looks like it's on fire haha
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Re. Dreaming
25th Aug 2019 6:09pm
Re. Dreaming
25th Aug 2019 6:22pm
Thank you, FeNyx! As always, your support and kind comments are appreciated x
Re. Dreaming
25th Aug 2019 7:09pm
Really emotional, emily. I love your expression of emotions through natural phenomenon. Beautiful...
Thanks for the warm welcome btw
Thanks for the warm welcome btw
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Re: Re. Dreaming
26th Aug 2019 5:14pm
Thank you so much & you're welcome! I look forward to reading whatever you decide to post x
Re. Dreaming
25th Aug 2019 8:02pm
Great piece!!👏
Very vivid and flows fabulously
Intense as well loved it! 🙌👏
Very vivid and flows fabulously
Intense as well loved it! 🙌👏
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Re: Re. Dreaming
26th Aug 2019 5:15pm
Re. Dreaming
26th Aug 2019 9:33pm
It's good to see you writing Emily. Your write holds a lot of tender feeling that is terrific to behold. Thank you for sharing with us. <3
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Re: Re. Dreaming
27th Aug 2019 4:30am
Thank you, Daniel! It feels good to be back! I appreciate the feedback & support as always x
Re. Dreaming
27th Aug 2019 3:08pm
A beautiful and moving poem Emily. Excellent write.... The image fit the words perfectly too.
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27th Aug 2019 5:31pm
Re. Dreaming
16th Dec 2019 5:55am
this is deep and powerful and you are such an expressive.. love this, hey i'm write as well so please check my site poemtheart i hope you like it :),,
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Re: Re. Dreaming
16th Dec 2019 1:18pm
Of course, I'll definitely check out your page! Thank you so much for your time & kind comment x
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17th Dec 2019 5:20am