The Deep

Amazing write dear lady. Powerfully written

Thank you, Liam! For reading and commenting :)

Lovely write ... your words are also felt deeply ... Bless and love ... .

Thank you, Alan :) Yes, I do feel at home here. Thanks for the read and the comment!

Tight piece with a great flow, the first few stanzas really ring true

Thanks much, I appreciate that!

Brava Liv! I am glad you found a home here on DUP. This poem is an awesome tribute to the site. I can tell your words come from a deep place and I appreciate the vulnerability you've demonstrated by writing them down. As an "Eagles fan I love this passage "Just another rendition of Hotel California ." I've tried to leave twice and the pull of the DUP gravity is way to strong. I look forward to reading more of your work.

You’re too sweet. Thank you so much for reading and commenting, luv!

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Lol thanks PF, for the read and comment!

I've come and.gone many times but I don't stay away too long.

The sheets are clean and the ice machine works, what more can you ask for ??

I completely agree! Thanks so much for the read and comment!

Love this Liv!! Very very relatable in every way 👏👏👏
Love the ending lines
"You guys write shit like I rhymed them
Just because I feel them on that level
The Deep is now the muse to my mayhem"
Yes!!! As soon as I joined this site I realized this, it's truly an incredible place im not here as often as i would like to be but I try to come every day at least
Great piece love your stuff! 👏

Thank you, Hunter! I’m so glad you loved it. I try to come everyday as well. I get upset when I haven’t uploaded a poem in a couple of days haha thanks for the read and comment!

Check out anytime you like..
Fuck I came back like a cat you fed.
It was here I met the woman I call(ed) wife, mother of my daughter.
It is here I returned to tell the story
I feel at home in this here lunatic asylum

Excellent pen liv well done

I do too, Carpe! I’m glad you liked it. Thank you for the read and comment❤️

It's an incredible feeling when you're finally heard, isn't it? And the wealth of inspiration found in these halls is sometimes overwhelming. I occasionally have to take a step back & reset. The muse is not amused when we overdo it. Welcome home  :-)

Oh sweet Willow! Thank you dear, yes it does finally feel good to not only be heard but understood. Thanks for reading and leaving a lovely comment❤️

This is a place like no other. Really enjoyed this read 😁

I'm so happy you enjoyed it, DevilsChild! Thank you for stopping in to read and comment, I really appreciate it.

i KNOW exactly what You mean about this place!!
Years ago i left and became a member of other sites and it just was not the same (and some of the sites were not as lenient with Dark or Erotic inks).

& the Deep is ever exploring ways to adapt and become better.

You, Beautiful, are on Fire with the spectacular spilling!!

Thanks so much for saying that, dearest Tallen😌 I’m glad you enjoyed this and know just what I mean. Thank you for stopping in to read and comment❤️

Wow this is impressive.

Thank you, luv; I appreciate you saying that. Thank you for reading and commenting.

Amen sista! I think each of us, has at some point, showed love to the Deep in some words. I don't feel as whole as I once did, but this is family ...this place picked my ass up out of a rut...never saying goodbye to the deep. Even if I can't write, I can read my peeps. So glad you're positive soul is here, Liv...so happy you found your h❤me!

Pffft to rhyme scheme, be a rebel along with me!!;)

Aww me too, Pandora. Thank you so much for saying that. I really appreciate that. Thanks for reading and commenting!