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put your hands on my body
think I’m gonna take you home
i’m not worried about nobody
just want your hands to roam
music beating through my chest
when you pull your hips to mine
fingers brushing over my skin
your touch feels so divine
i came here with my friends
but I don’t know where they went
i doubt they would mind cause
baby, you were heaven sent
you're a wolf in sheep’s clothing
i know what you came here to do
i wasn’t looking for nobody but
now I’m stuck to you like glue
so put your hands on my body
i think you know just what I like
you’re already sending shockwaves
boy, I think you’re just my type
and your body is so magnetic
you’d think my bones were made of steel
i’m pressing that much closer to you
cause I love how your body feels
if you’re leaving here with somebody
i hope you know who it will be
you shouldn’t tempt me like this
or that somebody is going to be me
think I’m gonna take you home
i’m not worried about nobody
just want your hands to roam
music beating through my chest
when you pull your hips to mine
fingers brushing over my skin
your touch feels so divine
i came here with my friends
but I don’t know where they went
i doubt they would mind cause
baby, you were heaven sent
you're a wolf in sheep’s clothing
i know what you came here to do
i wasn’t looking for nobody but
now I’m stuck to you like glue
so put your hands on my body
i think you know just what I like
you’re already sending shockwaves
boy, I think you’re just my type
and your body is so magnetic
you’d think my bones were made of steel
i’m pressing that much closer to you
cause I love how your body feels
if you’re leaving here with somebody
i hope you know who it will be
you shouldn’t tempt me like this
or that somebody is going to be me
Published 29th Jun 2019
Author's Note
if i were a cheesy pop artist.
ps, this isn't even erotic? LOL
ps, this isn't even erotic? LOL
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29th Jun 2019 1:37am
Wow! Liv. This is one hot poem you made here. The flow is awesome. If you read this out loud, it sounds so sweet to the ears. Really good one, Liv. :)
29th Jun 2019 1:39am
Haha thanks! Maybe since I don't write this type of poetry a lot is why it feels so off to me :P
29th Jun 2019 1:37am
29th Jun 2019 1:39am
Thank you, Marks, for the read and uplifting comment. I was two seconds away from deleting it! :)
You're welcome.
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Verse: "... i came here with my friends..."
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Verse: "... i came here with my friends..."
Somehow DUP readers are your friends too.
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29th Jun 2019 1:43am
in a way it very erotic only need to read between the lines and you can feel the heat that flows
nice work
nice work
29th Jun 2019 1:45am
Thank you, nutbuster (currently dying of laughter at the username) for the read and encouraging words :)
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29th Jun 2019 2:16am
Really cool write ... it reads like my guy friends fantasies of going to the club lol ... "oh yeah she's all into you man" ... Bless and love ...
29th Jun 2019 2:19am
We women have our fantasies too, men just rarely live up to them lol, thank you sweet Alan, for the read and comment :)
29th Jun 2019 2:46am
Great set of lyrics couldn't help singing them as I read. A friend asked me the othr day t write him a pop song. Great write
29th Jun 2019 2:47am
Thanks, Stanhoven, for the read and kind comment :) That's how I wrote it though, to a tune I couldn't get out of my head.
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1st Jul 2019 8:26pm
Ah man, I love this! Metaphors again, girl, you and the metaphors...You set a scene & roped us in. Nicely done!! :-)
1st Jul 2019 10:15pm
Thank you, dearest Willow❤️ I have been working more on the metaphors, I’m so glad you noticed! Thank you for the read and comment!
