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Wor Penumbrae
Partially shaded around the edges
of our shadows,
we neither ran nor shied away
embracing the darkness
of one another
soaking ‘til wrinkled
we grew,
anew
Much of our connect is shrouded
hidden in an occult
darkened only by our lack of
knowledge we’ve not yet shared
with the other
of our respective gift
a painful reminder
we are different
think differently
feel
Nevertheless,
we persist
exist
& our empathy is only
eclipsed by our intense
love
for each other
Notwithstanding
our trip
quiet errors
has not altered
the destined path
our slow
methodical goal
towards
skin to skin
in
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Re. Wor Penumbrae
14th Jun 2019 8:55am
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Re. Wor Penumbrae
14th Jun 2019 11:34am
I like the notion of a perfectly equally distributed shadow around an object or person - it conjures up a sense of equality of understanding and motivation towards a common goal - and equal desire to resolve the meaning of the shadow. I really enjoyed this.
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Re: Re. Wor Penumbrae
14th Jun 2019 3:34pm
You describe nearly what i felt but i lack the correct order of lines to describe it
but You and many others read what i feel and so
maybe it doesn't matter that much that i spill
perfection.
thank You for sharing with me
but You and many others read what i feel and so
maybe it doesn't matter that much that i spill
perfection.
thank You for sharing with me
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Anonymous
14th Jun 2019 11:46am
I can see it visually, but also as a couple holding hands on a beach waiting for an approaching tidal wave to crash over them both. The soaking, wrinkling adds to this alternative imagery.
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Re: Re. Wor Penumbrae
14th Jun 2019 3:36pm
Love Your interpretation
and imagery
I was thinking more of a couple aging
wrinkly skinned but i love the thought of braving together a really big wave.
appreciate the share from You
and imagery
I was thinking more of a couple aging
wrinkly skinned but i love the thought of braving together a really big wave.
appreciate the share from You
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Anonymous
14th Jun 2019 2:27pm
Quiet growth...that's what this one feels like. A tentative but firm step forward
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14th Jun 2019 3:38pm
Quiet growth
often, for me, represents inner growth
which is not less important as the growth
others can monitor, emulate or marvel at
thank You for the wonderful read
often, for me, represents inner growth
which is not less important as the growth
others can monitor, emulate or marvel at
thank You for the wonderful read
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14th Jun 2019 3:23pm
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14th Jun 2019 3:43pm
thank You, Lover
I actually crave the dark
and so never fear experienced.
How wonderful both of us can sit in pitch black
dark and be happy about it !!
I actually crave the dark
and so never fear experienced.
How wonderful both of us can sit in pitch black
dark and be happy about it !!
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14th Jun 2019 4:07pm
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15th Jun 2019 00:05am
Re. Wor Penumbrae
15th Jun 2019 5:12am
this is so beautiful dearest Tallen
connecting on a whole other level...
great write...
love Brenda 🌹
connecting on a whole other level...
great write...
love Brenda 🌹
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Re: Re. Wor Penumbrae
15th Jun 2019 5:17am
For a lasting relationship to endure
both must learn of the other's shadow
so to know one another better
It is, indeed a connection most people avoid
appreciate the kind comments,
Brenda
both must learn of the other's shadow
so to know one another better
It is, indeed a connection most people avoid
appreciate the kind comments,
Brenda
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Re: Re. Wor Penumbrae
16th Jun 2019 4:19pm
Oooooooooooooooo............
love, love
Your description here
I now want to soak in super hot bath water
and about 10 Green Tea Bags (Yes, i soak in green tea on purpose)
thank You for the share
Honored for the RL add
love, love
Your description here
I now want to soak in super hot bath water
and about 10 Green Tea Bags (Yes, i soak in green tea on purpose)
thank You for the share
Honored for the RL add
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Anonymous
17th Jun 2019 6:36am
much like the pirate gentleman, i thought ov water... washing oneself so clean that the skin has pruned... but i have an obsession with 3hr long baths lol soooooo dont mind me.
this is such a gorgeous write, tallen... you write with a delicately esoreric pen; nothing too muddled but just enough to make one scavange between the lines.
this is such a gorgeous write, tallen... you write with a delicately esoreric pen; nothing too muddled but just enough to make one scavange between the lines.
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(next time, try adding about 5 to 7 Green Tea Bags to Your bath. It draws out the toxins in You and replaces with a different type of energy. Too many bags and You will become weak, too little and You will feel )
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Often, i do spill esoteric ink on purpose as i write to a specific audience and if others understand then a bonus for them!!
i appreciate the super comments and kind praise
thank You, Beautiful shadoe
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Often, i do spill esoteric ink on purpose as i write to a specific audience and if others understand then a bonus for them!!
i appreciate the super comments and kind praise
thank You, Beautiful shadoe