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No Stone of Silence
Not one to cast a stone of silence,
your poetry angles a position
mounted by hurt and hunger,
a post-religious itch to unravel
the unchewed bitter cud of failed kinships.
Some see it as a safe haven
for lost childhoods
claw-hammering open nailed-coffins,
examining rotting contents with a detached eye
to scrape, at long last, a meagre healing.
Others smell stinking entrails
hung on the washing line for salacious airing
as neighbours watch wide-eyed in confused respect
with nervous titters of soiled self-recognition.
Such capitulation, albeit reluctant,
applauds the steady nerve of passive resistance
until maturity offers freedom for an active choice;
a sharp pleasure releases black-bottled ink.
To recover from this onslaught
I shall pinch your 1940s sit-up-and-beg bicycle
cover it in gold leaf
and use its big basket
to cart dug spuds and onions
from my sacred allotment.
Each pedal-turn reminds me of your open letter
declining the White House invitation in 2005.
#Sharon Olds
Written by
Josh
(Joshua Bond)
Published 9th Jun 2019
| Edited 9th Mar 2024
Author's Note
Comp entry for “Fear of Oneself”/(The Classic Corner: Sharon Olds' Tribute), hosted by Ahavati.
Poem written after reading consecutively a series of Olds’ poems; if I have to choose one for a link then it would be: “The Day They Tied Me Up” {https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poetrymagazine/browse?contentId=36935}
The notion of 'casting a stone of silence' can be found in Seamus Heaney's poem "Punishment".
(photo credit: Joshua Bond)
Poem written after reading consecutively a series of Olds’ poems; if I have to choose one for a link then it would be: “The Day They Tied Me Up” {https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poetrymagazine/browse?contentId=36935}
The notion of 'casting a stone of silence' can be found in Seamus Heaney's poem "Punishment".
(photo credit: Joshua Bond)
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Re. No Stone of Silence
9th Jun 2019 11:30am
I don't know what magic lays within Olds. Your poem blows me away. resonated greatly.
"as neighbours watch wide-eyed in confused respect
with nervous titters of soiled self-recognition."
i adore this so much along with the depth of the rest of the work.
I am also glad I found the letter she wrote to Laura Bush that you mentioned:
https://www.thenation.com/article/open-letter-laura-bush/
the last line: "I thought of the clean linens at your table, the shining knives and the flames of the candles, and I could not stomach it. "
proud to have found her.
"as neighbours watch wide-eyed in confused respect
with nervous titters of soiled self-recognition."
i adore this so much along with the depth of the rest of the work.
I am also glad I found the letter she wrote to Laura Bush that you mentioned:
https://www.thenation.com/article/open-letter-laura-bush/
the last line: "I thought of the clean linens at your table, the shining knives and the flames of the candles, and I could not stomach it. "
proud to have found her.
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Re: Re. No Stone of Silence
9th Jun 2019 11:57am
Hi nomoth, thank you for your thoughtful comment - and the RL. Really nice to get some feed-back that the poem had such impact. I didn't know that much about Sharon Olds poetry until I started to read it for the comp, and do some further research about her life. At first I wasn't too keen on her work but then I read the Bush letter - and it reminded me everyone is on a journey of process-healing trauma to hopefully and eventually reach a place of healed maturity where taking such a stand with such eloquence (re the Bush letter, I mean) exonerates the long journy with a worthy outcome. Thank Ahavati, not me, for the deeper intro to Olds' work :))
Re. No Stone of Silence
9th Jun 2019 3:10pm
Love this, Josh. Excellent entry - captures Olds' rebellious spirit in regards to her moral compass. It takes a strong person to stand firm, especially toward the ruling echelon. She was one, and this verse captures it perfectly.
Best of luck in the comp.
Best of luck in the comp.
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Re: Re. No Stone of Silence
9th Jun 2019 4:03pm
Thank you. Comps are suddenly abounding on DUP but hoping to get my head around Lorca soon. Been reading his poems, and about his life, earlier on today. I think your "Classic Corner" series with Johnny is a great contribution to DUP.
In today's Guardian there is an article about a newly discovered poem by Siegfried Sassoon. If it's of interest, here's the link:
https://www.theguardian.com/books/2019/jun/09/student-discovers-new-siegfried-sassoon-love-poem
In today's Guardian there is an article about a newly discovered poem by Siegfried Sassoon. If it's of interest, here's the link:
https://www.theguardian.com/books/2019/jun/09/student-discovers-new-siegfried-sassoon-love-poem
Re: Re. No Stone of Silence
That was a beautiful poem, Josh. Thank you for sharing. And, wow! In his own handwriting too!
I'm happy you enjoy these classic comps. They can do nothing less than enrich the poetic life of poets who study them.
I'm happy you enjoy these classic comps. They can do nothing less than enrich the poetic life of poets who study them.
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Re. No Stone of Silence
9th Jun 2019 5:33pm
I sure enjoy Ahavati's and Johnny's comps introducing us to writers/poets I've heard about but never delved into. Your piece is filled with a profound reflection.
Good luck in the comp.
Good luck in the comp.
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Re: Re. No Stone of Silence
9th Jun 2019 7:30pm
Re: Re. No Stone of Silence
9th Jun 2019 8:28pm
Thank you Wally. I have a confession to make in that generally I enjoy reading about (more?) the lives of the poets themselves than their poetry (hmmm). What interests me is how the poet's individual journey influences their poetry - and Sharon Olds is no exception to this.
I've recently come across a George Carlin youtube clip which is the nearest to poetry (rap) that I've ever heard him. I'm a great fan of his. You might like it:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8N_xUDzc3qM
I've recently come across a George Carlin youtube clip which is the nearest to poetry (rap) that I've ever heard him. I'm a great fan of his. You might like it:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8N_xUDzc3qM
Re. No Stone of Silence
9th Jun 2019 8:38pm
This whole piece escaped me the first time around... I guess I was just not ready
for the onslaught of words... all with deep meaning...for us all, if only we'd see...
Much like leading a horse to water...still won't work proverbially.
It seems that every time I read this piece a little more comes into focus... a little more thread is wove...the tapestry developed a locus...and the picture a treasure trove...
I specially like the lines about the 1940's bike and the soon-to-be-gilded basket.
for the onslaught of words... all with deep meaning...for us all, if only we'd see...
Much like leading a horse to water...still won't work proverbially.
It seems that every time I read this piece a little more comes into focus... a little more thread is wove...the tapestry developed a locus...and the picture a treasure trove...
I specially like the lines about the 1940's bike and the soon-to-be-gilded basket.
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Re: Re. No Stone of Silence
9th Jun 2019 8:50pm
Thank you Ely for the persistence. I guess this one falls into the category of "Yes" in answer to the question: 'should one have to work hard to read a poem?'. I'm going through a phase using a lot of metaphor; it's kind of spilling out of me and I don't even know the meaning of some myself. I spent some time reading one Olds poem after another until it got under my skin - then wrote from that place.
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Re: Re. No Stone of Silence
9th Jun 2019 9:46pm
Thank you HF for such an engaging and positive-feedback response. I seem to be going through a 'metaphor-rich' phase at the moment. And the gold-leaf covered bike was an image that popped into my head one morning - though it's deeper meaning I'm still trying to figure out myself. Thanks again, Josh.
Re. No Stone of Silence
What i greatly am in stunned adoration amidst all the rush of metaphorical grandeur n uninhibited flow of the flow ..is the stern rebellious stance of the constantly piercing voice the narrative spells out yet so poetically rapturous n elegant! Echoes Ahavati 's comments above...n nodding heavily myself too to one of your reply above which says you more eager in poet's shaping circumstances n paining traverses of life ...that how brings out their inborne poetics & then shaping up more..for i ever believe a poet is born..n then perhaps made sculpted by ample adversities n so n so ... just me Poet..great piece & best for comp!
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Re: Re. No Stone of Silence
11th Jun 2019 1:40pm
Thank you Uma for such a thoughtful reply - and for the RL. Inspiring each other in the land of poets is a source of our overall 'field-strength' in a world that I believe needs poets more than ever to follow their vocation to the nth degree.
Re. No Stone of Silence
Anonymous
13th Jun 2019 11:26am
"Some see it as a safe haven
for lost childhoods
claw-hammering open nailed-coffins,
examining rotting contents with a detached eye
to scrape, at long last, a meagre healing."
You brought your A+ Game on this one for sure, Josh. Good luck in the comp.
for lost childhoods
claw-hammering open nailed-coffins,
examining rotting contents with a detached eye
to scrape, at long last, a meagre healing."
You brought your A+ Game on this one for sure, Josh. Good luck in the comp.
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Re: Re. No Stone of Silence
13th Jun 2019 2:47pm
Thank you - I guess when it comes to "lost childhoods" we all have our own stories that need healing - and no doubt somewhere in my consciousness it helped give birth to these words, catalysed by Olds' own journey.