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You're dwelling..
Please don't
decide to destroy your destiny
cause you're drowning in delusions
and deranged emotions..
so desperately wanting to wander freely,
escape this egocentric way of thinking.
It's an ever-changing exchange of energy
can't you see?
I must view the inner me
to not be the enemy
but I'm losing my mind as the moments roll by eternally.
Please don't
decide to destroy your destiny
cause you're drowning in delusions
and deranged emotions..
so desperately wanting to wander freely,
escape this egocentric way of thinking.
It's an ever-changing exchange of energy
can't you see?
I must view the inner me
to not be the enemy
but I'm losing my mind as the moments roll by eternally.
Published 31st May 2019
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31st May 2019 00:43am
31st May 2019 12:05pm
31st May 2019 00:50am
Try to ground and gain perspective, Hunter. It can seem too much at times. But, you are never wrong, only ever learning.
31st May 2019 12:08pm
I'm getting there! I wrote this a little while ago, not as down as I was then but yes I agree "ever learning"
Thanks for stopping by Ahavati!🙏
Thanks for stopping by Ahavati!🙏
31st May 2019 1:16am
31st May 2019 12:08pm
31st May 2019 4:27am
Being aware of the current moment, whatever we are going through, is powerful. You're doing great. I love the candid vulnerability of this piece. Love and light to you Hunter.
31st May 2019 3:05pm
Thanks so much for stopping by Daniel! Appreciate your words
Same to you m8!🙏
Same to you m8!🙏
31st May 2019 6:13am
31st May 2019 3:05pm
31st May 2019 7:18am
A vulnerable write that deserves much justice. I love how you changed up the format & the flow was melodic. Hugs, bash those demons
31st May 2019 3:06pm
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31st May 2019 5:14pm
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31st May 2019 8:33pm
