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I See
Pierced upon the soul
it seems,
hardened, metallic
darkness bleeds
don't buy the seams
the threaded dreams
no tatters, your heart
it matters
at least to me
it seems,
hardened, metallic
darkness bleeds
don't buy the seams
the threaded dreams
no tatters, your heart
it matters
at least to me
Published 28th May 2019
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Anonymous
28th May 2019 6:06pm
I don`t
think you
know
the affect
this
carries, luv ❤
28th May 2019 8:10pm
29th May 2019 1:49am
Anonymous
28th May 2019 8:46pm
The best message to give someone. Beautiful
29th May 2019 1:50am
Anonymous
- Edited 8th May 2020 8:45pm
28th May 2019 10:50pm
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29th May 2019 1:52am
29th May 2019 00:55am
Beautiful reassurances are what heals the wounds unseen... and I can see you doing that !
Lovely, Tim... 😎
Lovely, Tim... 😎
29th May 2019 1:53am
29th May 2019 2:50am
dearest Tim this is so beautiful
I'm happy to see this side of you
your love's breathtaking...
I'm extremely happy for you both...
love Brenda ❤
I'm happy to see this side of you
your love's breathtaking...
I'm extremely happy for you both...
love Brenda ❤
29th May 2019 3:42pm
29th May 2019 3:40pm
29th May 2019 3:42pm
29th May 2019 9:22pm
Another beautiful write, Tim. Love suits you..or is it "luv" ? I saw that.;)
29th May 2019 9:28pm
as they all say it is so beautiful...
Looking at someone with so much love and adoration
short but see so much in one..!
aa...
felt for sure
H
Looking at someone with so much love and adoration
short but see so much in one..!
aa...
felt for sure
H
5th Jun 2019 11:48pm
Anonymous
- Edited 4th Jun 2022 2:45am
10th Jun 2019 00:22am
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11th Jun 2019 00:39am
