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the bipolar dawn
the dawn came and a new day with her
I feel serene in her hopeful light
smiling while freckled optimism is sprinkled on me
stretch and look around
I wonder that yesterday was cast such a villain
a murderer of all my hopes and dreams
bipolar mania happens just that way
I hope to touch the skyline within my visions today
so I lasso a cloud lazily floating over my head
then on a light breeze, drift into the day
I see the peoples below me hustling to and fro
not me, not today
this day is special in its awakening
a dawning of my mind's truths
my depression will always come to an end
I just have to wait it out
breakthrough and write about it
even if I don't like what it has to say
in the badlands of sadness
personal truths can be found as well
beautiful canyons carved from the sands of grief
I turn and see my beauty in the very day who beholds me
I am the freckled optimistic dawn
looking out at a glorious desert canyon
I am me
I realize I can't be contained
within a thought or particular feeling
I'm one of a kind
so I will enjoy the day
and my unique perspective of it
Author's Note
each of us is one of a kind with unique perspective
enjoy the day🌹
enjoy the day🌹
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Re: Re. the bipolar dawn
24th May 2019 3:46pm
thank you beautiful Melia for the love on this write your comment being so beautiful as to bring me smiles...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re. the bipolar dawn
24th May 2019 4:07pm
Re: Re. the bipolar dawn
24th May 2019 4:10pm
thank you graciously dearest Tallen for such a beautifully heartwarming thought to brighten my days...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re: Re. the bipolar dawn
24th May 2019 4:45pm
Re. the bipolar dawn
24th May 2019 4:56pm
Re: Re. the bipolar dawn
24th May 2019 4:57pm
thank you dearest Tim yes it is...even the dark gives perspective... I will enjoy the light today...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re. the bipolar dawn
24th May 2019 6:52pm
I would never consider something intense to be whimsical, and vice versa. This piece hits that juxtaposition precisely! I look forward to reading more from you.
Blessings, Silence
Blessings, Silence
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Re: Re. the bipolar dawn
24th May 2019 6:56pm
thank you graciously dearest poet for the love and thoughts on this write... I deeply appreciate you reading...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. the bipolar dawn
24th May 2019 7:12pm
Re: Re. the bipolar dawn
24th May 2019 7:14pm
Re. the bipolar dawn
24th May 2019 10:36pm
"my depression will always come to an end
I just have to wait it out
breakthrough and write about it
even if I don't like what it has to say"
... never were truer words spoken, at least from my perspective. Hugs, Josh :))
I just have to wait it out
breakthrough and write about it
even if I don't like what it has to say"
... never were truer words spoken, at least from my perspective. Hugs, Josh :))
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Re: Re. the bipolar dawn
25th May 2019 4:54pm
Re. the bipolar dawn
25th May 2019 2:00am
"I turn and see my beauty in the very day who beholds"
One day at a time, sweet Crimson.
Thank you for bearing your soul.
One day at a time, sweet Crimson.
Thank you for bearing your soul.
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Re: Re. the bipolar dawn
25th May 2019 4:54pm
Re. the bipolar dawn
25th May 2019 9:24am
Wow, this is such a nice take on the matter... It made me smile.
Written so lightly and sweet, keep on being you, you're pretty good at it! 😉
Delanee.
Written so lightly and sweet, keep on being you, you're pretty good at it! 😉
Delanee.
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Re: Re. the bipolar dawn
25th May 2019 4:56pm
thank you beautiful Delanee I was feeling good this particular morning that's how bipolar goes good days and bad I just have to remember the bad days will pass...
I deeply appreciate your thoughts...
love Brenda 🌹
I deeply appreciate your thoughts...
love Brenda 🌹
Re. the bipolar dawn
25th May 2019 4:55pm
Re: Re. the bipolar dawn
25th May 2019 5:08pm
thank you graciously dearest Daniel this doesn't speak on many of the days as they are mostly a deep depression I think I wrote this as a reminder to me in the length of night's time it can pass... bipolar being constant bouts of ups and downs...
I deeply appreciate your thoughts...
love Brenda ❤
I deeply appreciate your thoughts...
love Brenda ❤
Re. the bipolar dawn
Anonymous
28th May 2019 00:52am
Beautiful One this is a gorgeous write - although there is a frustration behind it, it can’t be “heard” that way - just tranquil, matter of a fact, almost oddly peaceful...well done, my love...
I love you...
Love always Taryn 🌻❤️🌻
I love you...
Love always Taryn 🌻❤️🌻
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Re: Re. the bipolar dawn
28th May 2019 1:15am
thank you my beautiful one this was a good day and I wanted to write how I felt capture if you will as a reminder on my depressed days that it will pass...
I love you thank you for being there...
love Brenda 💕
I love you thank you for being there...
love Brenda 💕
Re. the bipolar dawn
16th Jun 2019 00:33am
I had to pause a minute before I can comment here. So much truth intertwined with such delicate elegance beautiful Brenda! I would love permission to print this out in multiple copies. One for the fridge, one for the window over my kitchen sink, one for each bathroom mirror, one for each of my daughters bedroom doors and one for my tattoo artist. (Just kidding on the last one. I dont have any tattoos. But if I did this would be ou n the running) Anytime I'm going through intense physical pain I grab on to the fact it's going to end. It becomes my mantra. But depression is a whole new ballgame. When it hits, my perception of the world becomes suffocating. But I have found if I try really hard to focus on something pleasant or maybe a victory in my life, it gets me through.
I want to thank you so much Brenda. Your words have given me another tool to hold onto!! And that Love is priceless!
- Much Love Minxy❣
I want to thank you so much Brenda. Your words have given me another tool to hold onto!! And that Love is priceless!
- Much Love Minxy❣
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Re: Re. the bipolar dawn
16th Jun 2019 11:09pm
beautiful Minxy One I am so deeply honored and moved by your comment...yes print it if you like I'm happy this write affected you this way...as I wrote it to remind myself the depression would come to an end...
thank you for letting me know this helped...
love Brenda 💕
thank you for letting me know this helped...
love Brenda 💕
Re. the bipolar dawn
16th Jun 2019 00:49am
I like the positive feedback you give yourself in this poem. Taking the time to appreciate you without any complexity it is simply stated.
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16th Jun 2019 11:10pm