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You were my dream for me
who encouraged me to be
let me find my own way
and live it everyday
little iota verses to allay
little orts of accents to filet
affords more time to sleep
bestows more cryptic dreams
You are my fantasy leisure
my petit mal seizure
the perfect daydream
that got away from me
So eerily common
understandably rare
musings don’t come often
as Edenic wares
You are (still) my dream
ever will forever be
to me
to see
to be
agree
…returning to sleep
who encouraged me to be
let me find my own way
and live it everyday
little iota verses to allay
little orts of accents to filet
affords more time to sleep
bestows more cryptic dreams
You are my fantasy leisure
my petit mal seizure
the perfect daydream
that got away from me
So eerily common
understandably rare
musings don’t come often
as Edenic wares
You are (still) my dream
ever will forever be
to me
to see
to be
agree
…returning to sleep
Published 23rd May 2019
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23rd May 2019 10:56am
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Anonymous
- Edited 8th May 2020 8:45pm
23rd May 2019 12:07pm
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23rd May 2019 12:12pm
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23rd May 2019 12:55pm
Dreams maybe cryptic but I find reality just as cryptic sometimes . Enjoyed the read tho
23rd May 2019 1:22pm
23rd May 2019 3:13pm
Hmmm, sometimes I think getting up in the morning is just moving from a horizontal dream to a vertical one. We're only consciously aware of about 2% of the electromagnetic spectrum - there's a hell of a lot else going on.
23rd May 2019 3:35pm
Sometimes i will recall 4 or 5 video clips of dreams
never getting the full picture
I need a nap now
never getting the full picture
I need a nap now
23rd May 2019 5:34pm
23rd May 2019 6:15pm
In dreams I think, with the relaxation of body, there is a surrender, that which weighs on heart and mind plays out, unwinds, attempting resolution, encapsulated in symbolic review. Each line has a perfectly balanced meter, which I feel carries that kind of relaxed somnolence. Second and third stanzas were my favorite, can't pick between them. There is a kind of surrender and perhaps melancholy as well. 💖🙏🏻
23rd May 2019 6:17pm
Agree
and it is as You read this spill to be
appreciate the depth to Your
comments here
thank You, Brother
and it is as You read this spill to be
appreciate the depth to Your
comments here
thank You, Brother
Anonymous
- Edited 22nd Feb 2020 6:45am
23rd May 2019 7:56pm
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23rd May 2019 8:00pm
You got it (this) !!
I will always treasure each time she caused me
to laugh
to feel loved
to feel understood
to hope
I will always treasure each time she caused me
to laugh
to feel loved
to feel understood
to hope
24th May 2019 6:48am
dearest Tallen so tender is your heart
it's evident from this write...
beautiful...
love Brenda 💕
it's evident from this write...
beautiful...
love Brenda 💕
24th May 2019 6:50am
My heart doesn't change
though sometimes i wish it could harden on command
appreciate Your sensitivity to this spill
and thank You for the kind praise
Beautiful Brenda
though sometimes i wish it could harden on command
appreciate Your sensitivity to this spill
and thank You for the kind praise
Beautiful Brenda
Anonymous
24th May 2019 3:43pm
Love the ones that lie waiting for you to awake. And then ambush the crap outta ya with this kinda beauty. Unconditional, that's what I read here
24th May 2019 3:55pm
