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Rainbow Mind
I feel Her colors
when it rains.
I feel Her breaking free
drowning Her pains,
I feel Her in me.
I feel me in Her
becoming alight,
evoking Herself to
light up the night;
She is Heaven's bliss.
She is in me
becoming my voice,
I write from Her soul
becoming her choice;
We are the same voice.
Here within a rainbow mind
the sun is shining
all the time.
We are as one,
we sing in kind;
a rainbow vision,
colorblind.
.....
when it rains.
I feel Her breaking free
drowning Her pains,
I feel Her in me.
I feel me in Her
becoming alight,
evoking Herself to
light up the night;
She is Heaven's bliss.
She is in me
becoming my voice,
I write from Her soul
becoming her choice;
We are the same voice.
Here within a rainbow mind
the sun is shining
all the time.
We are as one,
we sing in kind;
a rainbow vision,
colorblind.
.....
Written by
PoetsRevenge
Published 21st May 2019
Author's Note
Written for Amelias 'Rainbow Prophecy' comp. Inspired in part by ' The Sun Is Shining' by Bob Marley. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QQQpkll5aoA
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Re. Rainbow Mind
21st May 2019 4:34am
I love that final line, PoetsRevenge.
The contrast completely put the entire verse into perspective.
The contrast completely put the entire verse into perspective.
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Re: Re. Rainbow Mind
22nd May 2019 3:12am
That's so great to hear, because this evolved as I was writing it. About halfway through I thought of the Bob Marley song and took that direction with it. I'm so glad you liked it, thanks for the comment :)
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21st May 2019 5:49am
I think the lilting rhyme and cadence carried a message I perceive as mellifluous well. I hope you do well in the comp PR.
Daniel
Daniel
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22nd May 2019 3:33am
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Anonymous
21st May 2019 11:27am
This is fabulous, PR.
There is no "I" in this rainbow for certain.
There is no "I" in this rainbow for certain.
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22nd May 2019 4:31am
That's great to hear, I just sort of wrote this and posted it a few minutes later with no editing which is really a first for me to be that candid so I'm glad it came out good, thanks for the comment :)
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