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Come Stroll The Moonlight
( before we fly home )
Come, attend us,
dear sisters & daughters!
Come stroll the moonlight
along tide waters!
Let’s gaily walk the
promenade beaches
Of the tide-swept
shorelines’ coastal reaches.
How they shine with
Luna’s opal blessings!
We’re lovely in our
scarves of evening mist,
Swept up off our necks
like black swans adrift.
And seashell bangles,
dangling, play a tune
That sound like bubbles
surfacing to swoon...
Aaaaahhhh
NaPoGloPoWriMo 2019
Come, attend us,
dear sisters & daughters!
Come stroll the moonlight
along tide waters!
Let’s gaily walk the
promenade beaches
Of the tide-swept
shorelines’ coastal reaches.
How they shine with
Luna’s opal blessings!
We’re lovely in our
scarves of evening mist,
Swept up off our necks
like black swans adrift.
And seashell bangles,
dangling, play a tune
That sound like bubbles
surfacing to swoon...
Aaaaahhhh
NaPoGloPoWriMo 2019
Author's Note
30/30
60 unique words
60 unique words
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Re. Come Stroll The Moonlight
30th Apr 2019 5:04pm
Congratulations, Kathy! A beautifully meditative invitation after a tumultuous yet fulfilling journey! Month's end is always a melting pot of emotion and fatigue, but poetry like this brings us home all over again.
Thank you for sharing yourself with us this month, Kathy. I have truly enjoyed your journals and getting to know you better through your poetry. xo
Thank you for sharing yourself with us this month, Kathy. I have truly enjoyed your journals and getting to know you better through your poetry. xo
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My endless thanks to you dear One for all the time you have been here for me - for everyone - and helping me to keep on believing. I keep fighting back the tears. You are such a blessing of a woman. xo
Kathy <3
Kathy <3
Re. Come Stroll The Moonlight
30th Apr 2019 5:07pm
Beautiful. Thank you for this 30/30, well done. Congratulations you beautiful queen. To many more journeys and many more NaPos!
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Thank you so much dear Poppy, I'm terribly honored. I will continue to walk through your gardens as the months carry on - even in spirit.
Re. Come Stroll The Moonlight
30th Apr 2019 5:29pm
Welcome past the finishing line Kathy; I have really enjoyed traveling with you; honoured you have allowed us fellow NaPos to peak inside your poetic journal.
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Thank you so much Josh - with all of your support, I would have been irresponsible in my efforts if I had not taken your always kind words to heart.
Re. Come Stroll The Moonlight
30th Apr 2019 11:07pm
Congratulations, Kathy! Your lovely Day 30 caps off a wonderful journey from a Journal that is now on the NaPo book shelf of selective works for all of us to come back to, to refer to and reminisce & enjoy any time.
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Re. Come Stroll The Moonlight
2nd May 2019 2:46pm
Re. Come Stroll The Moonlight
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3rd May 2019 5:33pm
Enjoyed this muchly, Kathy. The rhyme scheme took an unpredictablw turn without a hitch. A fine end do the mad 30 day dash that is NaPo.
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