SENRYU-SENSUAL MECHANISM

"rubs the pearl" ... love this line ...

Thank you, Soledad! It is a magical, happy spot of tingle generation.

We seek the perfect one and make things complicated but when you break it all down we just want someone to rub us the right way and make us happy. Love it Bob

Thank you, Tim. That is true. We are like Genies is a bottle, coming to life when rubbed :)

I am thinking what "sublime connection" is. The imagery of second line is sensual enough for me to imagine...

love
Jasmine

Thank you m, Jasmine. Sublime connection is born out of my contemplating the deep  physical connection established during intercourse...the sharing of one of our most prized possession...our bodies

Thank you, Ego! Good word that "terse." I enjoy the immediate impact of this form.

Being a rhyme enthusiast, I particularly love that last line, but this is altogether an example of fine senryu.  Great job!  

Thank you, Sir Crow! When I thought of that line I was certain it must have been used by someone, somewhere before. It was a new thought to me so I left it alone. I appreciate, as always, your kind words of encouragement.

i must not read erotica before noon
i must not read erotica before noon
i must not read erotica before noon
i must not read erotica before noon
i must not read erotica before noon
i must not read erotica before noon
i must not read erotica before noon
i must not read erotica before noon
i must not read erotica before noon


back to bed

sublimely sensual write, g
you have such a gently erotic touch
xo

Ahhhh..."but there in lies the rub." 😁 It's seems to me no better way to start the day. I am always thrilled and, admittedly, a bit turned on by your comments. You are partially to blame for my penchant for erotica 🙏 grazie mille, bella tentatrice 😁

oh & my
mercy & merci
consider me...
... titillated

Just doing my job, ma'am 😎

Best one yet. I love it!! Pearls love friction or atleast that's what I hear.;)

Keep em rolling

The variety of pearl mentioned loves to be rubbed, kissed, suckled etc etc etc. Thank you, beautiful Pandora, for the encouraging comment and RL add. 😉

Oh yes...etc, etc, etc. Giggles. I can see you're make a comeback with this one. It was absolutely on.freaking.point!! You're welcome but you earned it!!!

Good to be back in the folds...I mean fold. 😁

Senryu definitely one of my favorite type poetry. You perfect this one beautifully... a priceless moment :)

Thank you so much, Magic . I find there can be much power, beauty, sensually, and wisdom in a few well chosen words

Short sweet and beautifully composed

Thank you, AP. One of my favorite forms. Words must be chosen carefully.