SHALL WE DANCE?

Much akin to turtle doves
is how your mind does flutter
dancing in the street of Love
just on the curb but not the gutter.

Nice write, Bob

I love, love, love this poetic commentary 💕 I like it better than my poem...show off 😁 Thank you so much, Teri!

Those capable and willing of writing like you, do. Those incapable, like me, enjoy and hopefully leave appreciative comments.

I do however, like yours more.

No dance can top
The horizontal bop 💃

You speak the truth, Sir Back. Thank you for reading my work.

Favourite lines:

Ecstasy's flower reaching full bloom
Envelopes the monument fully erected

Thank you Solomon! I worried it was a tad obtuse. Did the "broken string of pearls" come through clear?

Love this write, Gahdess.  Being a rhymer myself, I appreciated it even more.  It adds to the fun.  By the way, "broken string of pearls" is a great image.  Fine work!

Thank you Sir Crow! I hadn't written a rhymer in awhile and I missed the challenge. I appreciate your validation of my pearls passage...the piece was built around that image.

Woah...you FINALLY wrote something.  Yay!! It's so good too. I love your wording, esp.. "Ecstasy's flower reaching full bloom 
Envelopes the monument fully erected"..
I've never thought to use monument, so oh so clever there.👌 Plus...
" Driven by concomitant sinews 
Every nerve clamors the climax they crave"

" Broken string of pearls plummet 
Warm seed-showers blanketing breasts"

..a freaking brilliant idea to refer to it as a broken string of pearls!! The blanketing breasts is to no surprise as you liked my piece so much about that. You now know I can't dance but you can sit on Goddesses lap. Lol. You aimed & scored with a comeback write, Mr!! Now I can tell you bravo!;)

Thank you so much, Pandora! You may not be able to dance but you can move and groove to the beat...a d pop wheelies 😁 I assure, because I'm a big guy, you wouldn't want me on your lap 😊 Although the thought made my tingle meater rise. 😊 Thanks for the RL too.

Thank you so much, Pandora! You may not be able to dance but you can move and groove to the beat...a d pop wheelies 😁 I assure, because I'm a big guy, you wouldn't want me on your lap 😊 Although the thought made my tingle meater rise. 😊 Thanks for the RL too.

Fully enjoyed .... bravo GW ...

Thank you, Soledad! I was hoping you'd read this one. I value your opinion.