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Life Renewed
I see her by the light of the moon
gazing out at the sea
still, but so full of electricity
wondering of all the possibility
She is strong, holding back the wind
the glow of the water transcends
life filters each breathe
it's the start another beginning,
and definitely not an end
gazing out at the sea
still, but so full of electricity
wondering of all the possibility
She is strong, holding back the wind
the glow of the water transcends
life filters each breathe
it's the start another beginning,
and definitely not an end
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Re. Life Renewed
16th Mar 2019 00:28am
Re. Life Renewed
Anonymous
16th Mar 2019 2:36am
"still, but so full of electricity"
That line lives & breathes, I swear. Fabulous!
That line lives & breathes, I swear. Fabulous!
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16th Mar 2019 3:41am
Re. Life Renewed
16th Mar 2019 6:03am
All so magnificent! I loved that rhyming and agree with FromTheAsh, that line really reeled me in! Whew, lovely write, JusTim :) kudos, always.
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Re. Life Renewed
16th Mar 2019 12:31pm
Hello Tim...
a determination to feel what is hoped, an endearing sentiment.
Kathy
a determination to feel what is hoped, an endearing sentiment.
Kathy
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