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Own Me
He kneeled before me.
Nuzzling my budding rose.
Inhaling my sweet femininity..
Sparking his flame...
Awakening a monster
with refusal to be tamed.
He stood tall
and
cradled me close
as
his kisses adorned me..
I felt weightless in his arms..
As his hands explored me.
He found
that I
wore no panties.
He laid me on his bed..
So gently.
His longing for me
devoured my thoughts
of holding back
from him.
Covered in a
slight perspiration..
A fever pitch..
I gave in.
To his touch..
His scent..
His masculinity.
My barrier crumbled.
He lit my fire..
It burned as if
my match
had never before
been lit...
His tongue circled
and flicked
each nipple
on both tits.
He buried his face
as he attempted
to smother
himself in me.
Our bodies twisted
in a
beautifully
passionate
entanglement.
I gasped for air
but I breathed him in.
Collapsing the wall
around my emotions that I
skillfully built
to keep out men like him....
My cold shoulder
didn’t stand
a chance
to your consistent consistencies...
Your red roses in random places..
caused me to give you
the childish
Cat and mouse chase...
Your endless efforts
to win my affection..
finally paid off.
A winner, you are.
Enjoy your prize..
It’s throbbing and soaking
between my thighs.
Pretty plump pussy..
He & her
eye to eye..
Introduced for the first time.
Face to face
with my privacy.
I’m weak with wanting..
His tongue bathed me.
Tasting my naturality.
His eyes were closed
as he drank me.
I came apart
when he stuck his tongue
Inside of me.
I rode the wave 🌊
and let him drown
in my satisfaction.
He never stopped
licking and slurping me in...
I came for him..
Again and again.
Repeatedly melting
in his mouth.
Making his face sticky
with my love serum.
I couldn’t keep myself
from unraveling
before him.
He murmured his encouragement..
causing me
to shatter inside.
He was pleased that
I came so easily...
I endured the torture
of him teasing me.
I quivered.
Limp with exhaustion.
But he showed no signs
of sympathy.
He wanted to own me
Mentally.
Introducing me
to sexual slavery.
I smiled at his
want and need
to keep me
under lock and key
Funny...
I’ve never felt so free.
Nuzzling my budding rose.
Inhaling my sweet femininity..
Sparking his flame...
Awakening a monster
with refusal to be tamed.
He stood tall
and
cradled me close
as
his kisses adorned me..
I felt weightless in his arms..
As his hands explored me.
He found
that I
wore no panties.
He laid me on his bed..
So gently.
His longing for me
devoured my thoughts
of holding back
from him.
Covered in a
slight perspiration..
A fever pitch..
I gave in.
To his touch..
His scent..
His masculinity.
My barrier crumbled.
He lit my fire..
It burned as if
my match
had never before
been lit...
His tongue circled
and flicked
each nipple
on both tits.
He buried his face
as he attempted
to smother
himself in me.
Our bodies twisted
in a
beautifully
passionate
entanglement.
I gasped for air
but I breathed him in.
Collapsing the wall
around my emotions that I
skillfully built
to keep out men like him....
My cold shoulder
didn’t stand
a chance
to your consistent consistencies...
Your red roses in random places..
caused me to give you
the childish
Cat and mouse chase...
Your endless efforts
to win my affection..
finally paid off.
A winner, you are.
Enjoy your prize..
It’s throbbing and soaking
between my thighs.
Pretty plump pussy..
He & her
eye to eye..
Introduced for the first time.
Face to face
with my privacy.
I’m weak with wanting..
His tongue bathed me.
Tasting my naturality.
His eyes were closed
as he drank me.
I came apart
when he stuck his tongue
Inside of me.
I rode the wave 🌊
and let him drown
in my satisfaction.
He never stopped
licking and slurping me in...
I came for him..
Again and again.
Repeatedly melting
in his mouth.
Making his face sticky
with my love serum.
I couldn’t keep myself
from unraveling
before him.
He murmured his encouragement..
causing me
to shatter inside.
He was pleased that
I came so easily...
I endured the torture
of him teasing me.
I quivered.
Limp with exhaustion.
But he showed no signs
of sympathy.
He wanted to own me
Mentally.
Introducing me
to sexual slavery.
I smiled at his
want and need
to keep me
under lock and key
Funny...
I’ve never felt so free.
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Re. Own Me
6th Mar 2019 6:33pm
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Re. Own Me
6th Mar 2019 6:43pm
That was some searing hot ink! Love the structure and the added suspense at each turn. So erotic!
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6th Mar 2019 6:54pm
Re. Own Me
7th Mar 2019 3:01pm
The power of giving pleasure is a beautiful thing! Sounds like you enjoyed the receiving👅
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Re. Own Me
7th Mar 2019 4:10pm
This is some sexy heat here mam. I haven't been on here in a while, but you damn sure made my visit worth it today. Thanks for sharing love. 💋
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7th Mar 2019 9:24pm
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Anonymous
7th Mar 2019 9:17pm
I would lover to explore your mind....perhaps some other parts as well!!
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Anonymous
8th Mar 2019 3:36am
Very good blend of delicate erotica and hardcore. I like your style. Very descriptive and very easy on the reader's mind. You captivate attention with suspense. Very good ink. J
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9th Mar 2019 1:50am
Re. Own Me
10th Mar 2019 5:12am
This is Fantastic! You are very Talented!! I can not wait to read another poem from you! Bravo!
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Re. Own Me
29th Mar 2019 1:40am
Wow, this flowed and took me on a journey. That was hot and he is one lucky man.
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Anonymous
- Edited 7th Sep 2022 7:45pm
29th Mar 2019 2:20am
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Re. Own Me
Liked the twist at the end. Not sure if it was a paradox but sounded like one. I also felt the usage of brief stuttering lines enhanced the imagery of short, quickened breaths that one might expect in a sexually charged situation like this.
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Re. Own Me
30th Mar 2019 5:33pm
Very hot ink LovelySoul... it owned my attention from beginning to the very end... I enjoyed the read
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Re. Own Me
1st Apr 2019 2:29am
now you know that the tongue is greater than any other part it never wears out stays ready all day
hot ink
hot ink
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1st Apr 2019 10:16pm
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1st Apr 2019 10:26pm
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8th May 2019 1:31pm
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13th Jun 2019 10:56pm
I would love to hear you read this as it is intended. Girl, honey, you, I will follow. You owned that!
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Re. Own Me
13th Jun 2019 10:59pm
I would love to hear you read this as it is intended. Girl, honey, you, I will follow. You owned that!
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Re. Own Me
16th Jun 2019 3:51am
How in the world did we miss this piece, you're such an erotic talent. Totally freaking tight piece Lady
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Anonymous
- Edited 28th Feb 2021 00:45am
14th Jan 2021 5:55am
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Re. Own Me
7th Feb 2021 1:23pm
Re. Own Me
12th Dec 2022 7:15am
Nice 👌 work I truly enjoyed 👍 your ink spill!! Please 🙏 keep 👏 on writing ✍ ok 👌 peace ✌ and blessings always 🙏 ❤ 💙
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