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Under Black Lace, Drips....
An emboldened lair of velvet &
blushing pearl___
wishing for an inquisition
To revere and nestle, it pleads
for some subservient flesh;
aroused & stiffened
Desiring tender warmth & solace,
but covets a
good fucking with some raw ambition
Longing for a sweet delirium feel
at the chasm of those folds;
ripe & glistening
Eager to be suffused & to the brim
with fervor;
clutching down in petition
Craving the mirth of their lust
as they exalt & extol;
mmm .... that sweet sin christening
A heart shaped ass in yearning too ___
for that throne of affections revival & reposition
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Re. Under Black Lace, Drips....
4th Mar 2019 9:43pm
beautiful Pandora I love the buildup and flow here...
I cried god yes here...
"Desiring the tender warmth & solace,
but covets a
good fucking with some raw ambition"
this is a lustful, desiring thing of great beauty...
love Brenda ❤
I cried god yes here...
"Desiring the tender warmth & solace,
but covets a
good fucking with some raw ambition"
this is a lustful, desiring thing of great beauty...
love Brenda ❤
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4th Mar 2019 10:51pm
Thank you, love. The sensual switch got turned to naughty today. I'm glad you liked it so!!!
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4th Mar 2019 10:52pm
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Anonymous
4th Mar 2019 10:25pm
You have become an excellent word master. Your research of attributes and descriptive, exotic layers, has taken you way beyond what you were, obtaining you recognition and glory. You have outdone your early days. Brava. J
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4th Mar 2019 10:55pm
I'm glad you see it, J. You were there from the start when this girl thought poetry was impossible. I'm deeply in love with words too...I lust them.. Lol...thank you, sweets. ♡
Re. Under Black Lace, Drips....
4th Mar 2019 10:41pm
Stop ... you went from tender to primal in one line ... and then the universe ... breathing ... Bless and ... you know ..
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4th Mar 2019 10:57pm
Giggles..so glad you liked that surprise my sweet friend!! I'm impish today.;)
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4th Mar 2019 11:04pm
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4th Mar 2019 10:44pm
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4th Mar 2019 10:59pm
Thank you so much, D..glad you enjoyed it!!! Hope your day has been beautiful my friend.
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4th Mar 2019 11:02pm
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4th Mar 2019 11:05pm
Pandoraunleased let's her sensual nature be know. To arouse with mere words what cannot be shown. Forbidden secrets unleashed with passion and desire. What this women describes stokes my lustful fire. True ecstasy in lyrics she releases her soul. If these words were ment to tantilize the spirit, you've met your goal.
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4th Mar 2019 11:10pm
Oh my..holy hell are you my new best friend! This comment has just blown my mind & made my day complete. I'm ever gracious for your praise..thanks isn't enough!!
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4th Mar 2019 11:23pm
Thank you dear Pandora, your praise is to kind. For it was your words of desire that tempted my mind. Beauty and grace can hardly describe, the sensations I get when I feel your vibe. A new fan from afar now and forever, I bow before your elegance, for you are much to clever.
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Re: Re. Under Black Lace, Drips....
5th Mar 2019 4:58am
A forever fan..I like that & hope I can keep the vibe going & your spirits up. You sure have lifted mine! Big hugs, New friend!!
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4th Mar 2019 11:41pm
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Re. Under Black Lace, Drips....
5th Mar 2019 3:19am
Seduced by the title alone. Fuck this certainly baited the appetite. That switch is on. And the suggestion in the final line of the revival and repositioning will only get things much hotter.
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5th Mar 2019 5:06am
You have me giggling..I figured it would grab your attention. I'm so glad you enjoyed the flip of the switch. It felt good & hopefully, cheers to more!
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5th Mar 2019 5:06am
You have me giggling..I figured it would grab your attention. I'm so glad you enjoyed the flip of the switch. It felt good & hopefully, cheers to more!
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5th Mar 2019 12:17pm
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Re. Under Black Lace, Drips....
5th Mar 2019 11:02am
Puts a few thoughts in my head. I'll keep them to myself though lol. Felt the raw desires with this.
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Re: Re. Under Black Lace, Drips....
5th Mar 2019 9:21pm
Yay. I'm glad you enjoyed it, but I can read your thoughts.😅 Blessed by the add!!
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5th Mar 2019 4:16pm
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5th Mar 2019 9:22pm
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Re: Re. Under Black Lace, Drips....
5th Mar 2019 9:25pm
Hey stranger!! Glad to see you plus know you liked it..I appreciate the kind words & add, Danny!!
Re. Under Black Lace, Drips....
5th Mar 2019 11:11pm
An erotic wonder, Pandora. "Craving the mirth of their lust" is just one of many lines of pure beauty. Sexy and deeply eloquent.
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6th Mar 2019 2:38am
As always, I really appreciate you. I'm glad you enjoyed it and found it RL worthy. Thank you so much.
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Anonymous
6th Mar 2019 6:14am
''An emboldened lair of velvet &
blushing pearl___
wishing for an inquisition ''
beautiful opening lines...
before a cascade of sheer metaphorical euphoria
...
blushing pearl___
wishing for an inquisition ''
beautiful opening lines...
before a cascade of sheer metaphorical euphoria
...
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6th Mar 2019 6:37am
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6th Mar 2019 5:16pm
I am so grateful for your comment & giggling. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Welcome to the Underground...you must be New! I will check you out soon.;)
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Re. Under Black Lace, Drips....
9th Mar 2019 2:08am
I love the way that you write "real" erotica (In my estimation) its subtle, sultry and so very sexy this kind of erotica is like a breath of fresh air (like heavy breathing) LOL
excellent ink as always :-))))))))))))))))))))
excellent ink as always :-))))))))))))))))))))
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Re: Re. Under Black Lace, Drips....
9th Mar 2019 1:50pm
Thank you, David!! This just made my entire day, I'm glad you think that & enjoyed this one. I needed this today so you get a 💋....
haha.
haha.
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Anonymous
10th Mar 2019 3:33am
Pandora.. you're a brilliant poetess.. Mr. Macleod has you pegged right.. love this..
Dave
Dave
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Re: Re. Under Black Lace, Drips....
10th Mar 2019 3:43am
Thank you, Dave...you are too sweet. You both made my day so this one's for you.💋 I'm humbled & honored!!
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14th Mar 2019 12:30pm
I'm so grateful, Laertes. You have made my day & put a smile on my face. Thank you for the awesome comment & add!!
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Re: Re. Under Black Lace, Drips....
14th Mar 2019 1:35pm
Appreciated!! Even if my mind is a little perverted..giggles..he once thought I was too much but now agrees. Enjoy your day sunshine!
Re. Under Black Lace, Drips....
20th Mar 2019 1:07am
I remember few days back when i wrote my intro and you were one of the first to welcome me and i saw your pic first thing i noticed was you had eyes of an angel and smile of the devil and i was so right this poem was my Purgatory i felt like i was caught between heaven and hell between angel and devil it evoked stoked and evoked. Ill tell you one thing this poem was hotter than the devils ass after eating red hot chillis. It was an absolute privilege to read this poem.
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Re: Re. Under Black Lace, Drips....
20th Mar 2019 2:24am
Thank you for this compliment, you've added a big grin & got me to laugh on a much needed day. You're too sweet & pretty damn funny. Glad you liked it too;) X
Re. Under Black Lace, Drips....
20th Mar 2019 3:50am
Easy with the word "sweet" girl you'll ruin my badboy reputation shhhhhhhh lol. Ive got an ego the size of Justin Biebers twitter account but Ive been very humbled here writers like Jade and LilDragonFly and yourself and so many others just blow my mind so ty again and im glad i made you smile on a much needed day i think that's the best compliment anyone's paid me. Have a great day and keep smiling. X
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5th Apr 2019 11:51pm
Thank you so much..nice to see a new user here. I'll get over & check you out as soon as I can!!