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The Red Thread
Omnisciently, he'd come; the keeper of her desires, majestically in auroral realm The heavens; they'd shake and rattle with cohesion and synchronism
By astral rhapsody, soar to Elysian fields of their own; making love as if beneath its slippery elms
Unparalleled and peerless; deep, the nirvana they'd serenade to in every moonlight requisition
Magnetic, the energy; a lucid mosaic of one ember and embodiment
Their covenant of sex -- quintessence of consonance, and synthesis;
a sacred infinity
Bound by fate with a thread of red; divine union of soul, but true in body;
now -- dormant
Time to dissapate; tear stained faces whisper "love you's"__ until next time; blessed be their serendipity
Published 4th Mar 2019
| Edited 31st Aug 2019
Author's Note
https://youtu.be/hoN6dEqv0R4
Based on telepathic sex between twin flames mixed with the Chinese ideology of the red thread...
"According to the Chinese myth, the gods tied an invisible red thread around the ankles of a man and a woman who were destined to meet and get married. The myth is similiar to the Western concept of “soulmates”. According to Chinese legend, the deity in charge of “the red thread” is believed to be Yue Xia Lao, the old lunar matchmaker god who is also in charge of marriages"
Based on telepathic sex between twin flames mixed with the Chinese ideology of the red thread...
"According to the Chinese myth, the gods tied an invisible red thread around the ankles of a man and a woman who were destined to meet and get married. The myth is similiar to the Western concept of “soulmates”. According to Chinese legend, the deity in charge of “the red thread” is believed to be Yue Xia Lao, the old lunar matchmaker god who is also in charge of marriages"
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4th Mar 2019 1:28am
4th Mar 2019 2:50am
Thank you so much. I appreciate your input beyond words, my biggest goal is just that.
4th Mar 2019 1:31am
You have my utter most respect my sweet poetess for such a fifth dimensional ink stain. in essence of celestial passion, you soar it beyond the stratosphere I'm there
4th Mar 2019 2:52am
Thank you, love. From one Goddess to another, you have me beaming. Thank you for the add too, I so appreciate it!!🌹
4th Mar 2019 1:47am
you set the scene for and encounter of the third kind where two minds meet and become as one
one awesome write
one awesome write
4th Mar 2019 2:53am
Thank you for the kind compliment and the add, D. It's an encounter like no other. I'm pleased you liked it.
4th Mar 2019 1:49am
4th Mar 2019 2:56am
Thank you, my new friend. Oh can I imagine what you'd post too, with a glimpse earlier. You're feral & I like it!! 👀
4th Mar 2019 3:17am
Indeed you documented it quite nicely in the Chinese way ... Lovely write and awesome you experienced ... Bless and love ..
4th Mar 2019 4:42am
Thank You, dear FeNyX. Different from the celestial one yet so alike in some ways. I guess that's why the celestial one intrigues me so.
4th Mar 2019 4:47am
As you say the celestial one is pure choice any two people of like mind can meet ... There are attractions and soulmates but still a conscious choice ... predestiny yes but one can avoid and change the equation ... randomness is part of all life but never adequately brought to the fore ... Bless and love ... ..
4th Mar 2019 5:15am
I wouldn't say it's pure choice for either. Soul mates can indeed be everywhere. I don't feel we play a role in finding that one with sexual & soul chemistry/ sensations beyond the earthly realm as with twin flames. Both aura's in my opinion are total serendipity, no coincidence in the matter...fates card.
4th Mar 2019 4:08am
when a current flows an electromagnetic field is created...telepathic currents seems to create a similar field...magnetic interaction...a most pleasurable read....love the image too...
4th Mar 2019 4:45am
Thank you, Lawrence. I was sure you would feel it. I'm glad you did!!
4th Mar 2019 6:37am
Mix of spiritual, romantic and sexy. After reading your footnote, I say the man would feel quite complimented for his part in the inspiring performance.
Thank you, Solomon. This is a special one for me because I believe in synchronicity like this.
4th Mar 2019 7:01am
4th Mar 2019 11:22pm
I'm so glad you felt it, N. Your add brought a smile too. Thank you so much !!
4th Mar 2019 12:13pm
Fabulous tones of spirituality immersed with sexuality in these words. Really well composed!
4th Mar 2019 11:24pm
Thank you, T. I hope I gave the experience justice..its so very spiritual indeed. Sigh
5th Mar 2019 00:00am
You did. I was surprised to the see the extreme content warning as I found it in no way offensive. A work of beauty!
5th Mar 2019 00:57am
Total accident!! Yet I forgot to on my deepthroat one..no way of fixing it afterwards though. I feared getting in trouble with that one. Lol
5th Mar 2019 3:08am
I've had that also happen a few times. Oh yes...the deep throat one. Didn't even catch the lack of a warning, probably due to my piqued interest in reading it. No ban means you slid one by. ;)
5th Mar 2019 5:07am
4th Mar 2019 12:33pm
beautiful Pandora you are highly skilled in your art
you had to know I would love this...
love Brenda 🌹
you had to know I would love this...
love Brenda 🌹
4th Mar 2019 11:27pm
Big smiles..I knew you would. See why I get your spiritual connection & it intrigues me?! Different flight of birds..same direction.;)
Thanks, my sunshine on melancholy.🌻
Thanks, my sunshine on melancholy.🌻
4th Mar 2019 1:59pm
5th Mar 2019 00:54am
