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Ocean Eyes
Her eyes are like the bluest skies, reflecting off the open ocean.
Her lips are like a blissful breeze, arousing all of my emotions.
Her touch, to me, so tantalizing, raises hairs upon my back.
Her taste is like no other; Of words I have a lack…
Her lips are like a blissful breeze, arousing all of my emotions.
Her touch, to me, so tantalizing, raises hairs upon my back.
Her taste is like no other; Of words I have a lack…
Author's Note
A poem I wrote a couple of years ago. Image credit goes to Rakesh Patro.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. Ocean Eyes
24th Feb 2019 4:30am
I like this ... it’s pure and the picture fits perfectly.
very nice :) NB
Jackie
very nice :) NB
Jackie
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24th Feb 2019 4:37am
Thanks so much for continually keeping up with my poetry, Jackie! It means a lot. I'm so glad that you enjoy it! Your kind comments are always appreciated :)
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Anonymous
24th Feb 2019 5:26am
brief...smooth...yet so intense...
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24th Feb 2019 5:30am
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24th Feb 2019 12:10pm
Heh, thanks for stopping by, Sweet :)
My lack of words began at the end of this poem! 😁
My lack of words began at the end of this poem! 😁
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24th Feb 2019 12:54pm
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24th Feb 2019 7:12pm
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24th Feb 2019 3:46pm
Beautifully penned my friend absolutely stunning spill👏👏 love the fabulous pic as well lovely write!
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25th Feb 2019 8:50pm
Heh, that's a great compliment, Hunter - you're a nice guy :)
Thanks for continually stopping by to read my poetry. It means a lot!
Thanks for continually stopping by to read my poetry. It means a lot!
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27th Feb 2019 8:19pm
Re. Ocean Eyes
24th Feb 2019 5:53pm
Epic write with perfect imagery, especially the opening. It reminds me of this song...
https://youtu.be/-u5gDCNwTiw
https://youtu.be/-u5gDCNwTiw
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27th Feb 2019 8:29pm
Thanks so much, Pandora! I'm glad that you decided to stop by again! I just listened to that song, and I really liked it. Very relaxing, and serene :)
Ocean Eyes
24th Feb 2019 9:17pm
Minimalism with brute force.
Congratulations, NewB: the images within your image have hands of their own.
The eyes-lips-touch-taste progression smoothly swallows up the space between the speaker and the object of his affection. There's a new horizon in the eye of the beholder and the beheld.
Congratulations, NewB: the images within your image have hands of their own.
The eyes-lips-touch-taste progression smoothly swallows up the space between the speaker and the object of his affection. There's a new horizon in the eye of the beholder and the beheld.
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Re: Ocean Eyes
27th Feb 2019 8:34pm
Hey cab! Your commentary is always much appreciated :)
I made sure to take my time to choose carefully. I probably sifted through thousands of images before I found what I had in mind! Also, just a little tidbit, but I almost named this poem 'Realm of the Senses', but I changed my mind. I still like that title though!
I made sure to take my time to choose carefully. I probably sifted through thousands of images before I found what I had in mind! Also, just a little tidbit, but I almost named this poem 'Realm of the Senses', but I changed my mind. I still like that title though!
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25th Feb 2019 1:05am
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27th Feb 2019 8:44pm
Thanks Robert! I'm glad that you enjoyed the poem - and thanks so much for stopping by :)
Re. Ocean Eyes
25th Feb 2019 3:22am
Short and sweet...your words have a lovely flow to them..beautifully written...nice write
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27th Feb 2019 8:54pm
Hey deadinme! I saw that you read several of my poems and you followed me - I'm really glad that my poetry resonates with you. I enjoy your poetry as well. Thanks for dropping and leaving comments :)
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Beautiful sensual ink NB. you painted a vivid picture of pure loveliness that enthralled your senses.
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27th Feb 2019 9:05pm
Hey summer!
You're too kind! I am happy that you enjoyed it! You always have the greatest compliments :).
This is just one of those poems that I had tucked away and finally decided to post! I'm so glad that you enjoyed it!
You're too kind! I am happy that you enjoyed it! You always have the greatest compliments :).
This is just one of those poems that I had tucked away and finally decided to post! I'm so glad that you enjoyed it!
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27th Feb 2019 9:42pm
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27th Feb 2019 9:07pm
Thank you, JusTim! Your commentary is deeply appreciated :)
I really liked the way you expressed that as well!
I really liked the way you expressed that as well!
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15th May 2020 2:47am