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To Be Eternally with You
“Let me confess before I depart this Earth
Without your love I’ll truly hurt,
“Making my life empty and uncomfortable
Because you’re the missing piece that makes my puzzle whole,
“When our flesh is one for that brief moment
My physical love you erotically own it,
“Sealed at the waist looking at you face-to-face
Lips not touching as my breath you taste,
“Your captivating moans are like a Siren’s song
That grip and pulsate all night long,
“Inch by inch-consuming my giving will
Sending through my body that satisfying chill,
“Keeping my emotions on a roll-so my psyche don’t unfold
Liquid gold, because unknowingly my soul you have a hold,
“That endless clutch, across the borders of time
Not even letting go-after me dying,
“There’s nothing I would not do to keep your love
Sleep on a razor blade rug or let a vampire drain me of blood,
“Until I’m a dead hollow worthless shell
But I will always break free from the gates of Heaven or Hell,
“Stabbing my guardian angel through the heart
Fighting Asmodeous and his demon hoard in the pitch dark,
“Euthanizing all the animals on Noah’s Ark
Setting the Garden of Eden ablaze with a spark,
“Looking at the destruction of Sodom and Gomorrah
Because for your love I’ll overcome the cursed horror,
“Minor obstacles I would battle through
Just to be eternally with you”.
Without your love I’ll truly hurt,
“Making my life empty and uncomfortable
Because you’re the missing piece that makes my puzzle whole,
“When our flesh is one for that brief moment
My physical love you erotically own it,
“Sealed at the waist looking at you face-to-face
Lips not touching as my breath you taste,
“Your captivating moans are like a Siren’s song
That grip and pulsate all night long,
“Inch by inch-consuming my giving will
Sending through my body that satisfying chill,
“Keeping my emotions on a roll-so my psyche don’t unfold
Liquid gold, because unknowingly my soul you have a hold,
“That endless clutch, across the borders of time
Not even letting go-after me dying,
“There’s nothing I would not do to keep your love
Sleep on a razor blade rug or let a vampire drain me of blood,
“Until I’m a dead hollow worthless shell
But I will always break free from the gates of Heaven or Hell,
“Stabbing my guardian angel through the heart
Fighting Asmodeous and his demon hoard in the pitch dark,
“Euthanizing all the animals on Noah’s Ark
Setting the Garden of Eden ablaze with a spark,
“Looking at the destruction of Sodom and Gomorrah
Because for your love I’ll overcome the cursed horror,
“Minor obstacles I would battle through
Just to be eternally with you”.
Written by
CasketSharpe
Published 13th Feb 2019
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Re. To Be Eternally with You
14th Feb 2019 4:49pm
My man, this deep. You bring the same fire and punch to expressing love and devotion that you do to every other piece I've seen you write.
You are masterful and I'm proud to have you on my page.
Don't ever stop. Deep Underground is definitely better for your presence
You are masterful and I'm proud to have you on my page.
Don't ever stop. Deep Underground is definitely better for your presence
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14th Feb 2019 7:31pm
I truly appreciate that comment from a smooth and talented artist/poet like yourself. I'll keep it going as long as I can-coming raw and unfiltered, because that's the only way I know how to do it.
Re. To Be Eternally with You
17th Feb 2019 8:38pm
Haha, dude we told you that there is always that one. It''s not the sex, it's just that person that gets you. Tight
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18th Feb 2019 11:15pm
Thank you. I feel that many people who are in love with someone reach this level. I wrote this so it could be seen from a male or female point of view.
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6th Mar 2019 7:53pm
Sometimes our love does go to that place that only few have ever been before.
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Just let it consume you and it can be part of you more deeper than you know.
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