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Floral Utopia
Between thighs of white; Venus offers of you her delta. Think of them as if the swans who's wings unfolded as Zepharis graced his westward winds. With a fragrant bed in need of nourishment; just like his sweet Goddess Flora, I await your breath. Be the hummingbird in my garden; under skies of sun, siphon from my honeysuckle wild. Your thirst; in ripples - my pearly droplets of Amrita shall quay. Only at its depths, the vase beneath ecstacies tender bud; your wanton garden nymph wishes for you to plant seed. My garden shall you nourish. Your utopia; my Venus shall be.
Written by
PandoraUnleashed
Published 6th Feb 2019
| Edited 24th Aug 2019
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6th Feb 2019 10:36pm
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6th Feb 2019 11:19pm
Ah, thanks. Glad they both got the thumbs up. I'm feeling the Muse fade, but it has been awhile since I used somewhat old world sensuality.🌺
🙏for my muse. haha;)
🙏for my muse. haha;)
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6th Feb 2019 11:50pm
Honestly, I think she needs to regroup is all & study. I just replied to crimson's last piece about adding you two poem after poem. It's all inspiring me to take a break & practice. Plus I will NEVER conform BUT I vowed to develop actual poetic structures this year for challenge & growth. I think it's a "good" fade.;)
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7th Feb 2019 00:36am
Great words of wisdom;) I just feel my practice probably won't be of justice to post. Lol. I may not sleep tonight & purge another goodie like with Miss Lusty pants. Who knows.🤗🤞
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6th Feb 2019 10:43pm
my dearest PandoraUnleashed
you are the true mistress of lust
as i be glad to as some mit get a bit hot
sweet lushes pen
you are the true mistress of lust
as i be glad to as some mit get a bit hot
sweet lushes pen
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6th Feb 2019 11:20pm
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6th Feb 2019 11:24pm
Thank you, crowfly. I mixed the astro in with the myth SO hoping it would mesh.lol. There were so MANY lovers for them both & wish I could've weaved them in but the mind was only fit for a short write. Sigh.
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Anonymous
6th Feb 2019 11:22pm
Pandora,
That was so beautifully written. It was a restrained, gorgeous, incredibly sensual poem.
Good one to come back to.
Great writing, my friend.
Getting better all the time!
Matthew.
That was so beautifully written. It was a restrained, gorgeous, incredibly sensual poem.
Good one to come back to.
Great writing, my friend.
Getting better all the time!
Matthew.
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6th Feb 2019 11:27pm
Thank you, sweetest Matthew. I was just get ready to reply back to you. You're a treasure, glad to see your presence back in my commentary. Hugs, sweet friend!!
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Anonymous
6th Feb 2019 11:31pm
I couldn't stay away from you. I took a break and spent it reading some beautiful poems. Thank you for the poem and the hugs, right back at you.
Matthew.
Matthew.
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6th Feb 2019 11:42pm
Ah....poetry soothes the soul. That's all I do even outside of here..read & soothe it. Mmm
Re. Floral Utopia
7th Feb 2019 3:22am
Quite the bouquet of words. This almost reads like a fairy tale of the adult variety. I blame the garden nymph. Again, a remarkable reverence to the power at the core. Nicely done!
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7th Feb 2019 3:56am
I was reading about them again last night. There were so many other God's & Goddesses as their lovers. Maybe one day I'll be on A game and weave them all into lil Flora's tale & leave Miss Venus to the Astros
Zepharis stuck in my mind. Thanks, T!!
Zepharis stuck in my mind. Thanks, T!!
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7th Feb 2019 3:26am
i love the flirty sexy picture as well as your accommodation of words..
steamy!
steamy!
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7th Feb 2019 3:59am
Thank you, HowlingWhelms. I started to use to an original illustration of Flora & Zepharis but this was my modern day tale so choose this sexy " flower vase beneath the bud" so to speak. Thank you for stopping by to greet me!
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7th Feb 2019 12:26pm
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7th Feb 2019 4:34pm
I appreciate your kindness. I was "if"y on this one, tbh. Thank you!!
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7th Feb 2019 3:26pm
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7th Feb 2019 4:37pm
Thank you. This one deserved more depth, but I'm glad it came off better than I thought to be.
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7th Feb 2019 9:06pm
Thank you, Danny! Whacky erotic is a new one. Lol. I guess all the mythological stuff it's is in itself. Gladyou liked it though!!
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9th Feb 2019 7:53pm
the wavelength of erotic expressionism
strings through many theories of human copulation..
like..damn..the verbiage alone speaks utopia..
strings through many theories of human copulation..
like..damn..the verbiage alone speaks utopia..
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9th Feb 2019 8:04pm
Thank you, Naajir. I really appreciate such a compliment and the add..
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These words have just made an awful day good. They and the add humble me so. Thank you with a huge hug!
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