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Sacred Quiver
Manhood in it's hearth
Clamors throughout my veins
Quiver feeds my soul
♡
Clamors throughout my veins
Quiver feeds my soul
♡
Author's Note
This is my first attempt @ a senryu. I hope I got it right.
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Re. Sacred Quiver
6th Feb 2019 4:48pm
Re: Re. Sacred Quiver
6th Feb 2019 5:47pm
Thank you. I'm glad it was successful. I don't like or get haikus so I was leary.
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6th Feb 2019 5:04pm
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Re: Re. Sacred Quiver
6th Feb 2019 5:52pm
Thank you. I loved this pic too. I'm glad I got it right & it was fun to play around a bit since I feel the Muse leaving for awhile. I hate & don't understand haikus but this allows beauty and understanding imo. The rule of anything under 17 syllables was pushing it for the girl who uses too many words. Lol
Re. Sacred Quiver
6th Feb 2019 6:07pm
Re: Re. Sacred Quiver
6th Feb 2019 10:36pm
Awesome! I'm glad. I truly have made a vow to capture poetic forms this year. Thank you!!
Re. Sacred Quiver
6th Feb 2019 6:21pm
You did very well dear Pandora...very impressed and love the image fits...loved you jnk...👌
Wolfman 🐺
Wolfman 🐺
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Re: Re. Sacred Quiver
6th Feb 2019 10:39pm
Thank you so much. I'm honored to have the approval & glad to see you back. I know you're working on less time here. I'm kinda at that point myself. Hugs!!
Re: Re. Sacred Quiver
7th Feb 2019 1:26am
Your senryu, was not an attempt it was perfection dear...I was my pleasure to read ... Yes limiting my time here for I'm working on an erotic mythology story at the moment...plus taking some time for reflection of my future hopes and desires...
Understand your want to ease back some too...
Teddy Bear Hugs!!!🐻
Thomas🐺
Understand your want to ease back some too...
Teddy Bear Hugs!!!🐻
Thomas🐺
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Re: Re. Sacred Quiver
7th Feb 2019 1:33am
Ah, that sounds interesting. Can't wait to read it one day. I wish you growth and progress🌱🌳💛
Re: Re. Sacred Quiver
7th Feb 2019 1:37am
Thank you for your gracious wishes. Wishing you on your time away you find your inner depth and understanding of how special you are...🌷
When finished will make sure you are first to read it...😁
Wolfman🐺
When finished will make sure you are first to read it...😁
Wolfman🐺
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Re: Re. Sacred Quiver
7th Feb 2019 1:46am
Haha..inner depth & poetic form is more like it. That's my biggest goal. I have a big surgery coming up next month which will keep me in bed & uncomfortably so, so I really want an a wealth of knowledge as an outlet to keep me busy. Good night, dear & take care!!!🤗
Re: Re. Sacred Quiver
7th Feb 2019 12:48pm
I will pray for a swift recovery from your surgery dear...I totally understand the how uncomfortable being a hospital after surgery can be...Had that horrible experience two years ago so I'm with you on how it can be a real pain...no pun intended...lol...
I'm positive you will reach your goals...complete faith in you...
Good morning, dear and be safe and have a good day!!! 🙏😁
Wolfman🐺
I'm positive you will reach your goals...complete faith in you...
Good morning, dear and be safe and have a good day!!! 🙏😁
Wolfman🐺
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7th Feb 2019 6:03pm
Re: Re. Sacred Quiver
8th Feb 2019 2:56am
Re. Sacred Quiver
6th Feb 2019 6:33pm
For a first attempt, you have adopted quite nicely to the form. Killer opening line. Perhaps wrong about the muse.
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Re: Re. Sacred Quiver
6th Feb 2019 10:41pm
Thank you for the boost in confidence. I'm glad you found it appealing & written correctly. Yay!
Re. Sacred Quiver
6th Feb 2019 7:15pm
Re: Re. Sacred Quiver
6th Feb 2019 10:42pm
Re. Sacred Quiver
6th Feb 2019 9:56pm
I agree with the others above. You experiment with senryu and manage very well. I might take a stab at it myself sometime, since you inspire me.
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Re: Re. Sacred Quiver
6th Feb 2019 10:44pm
Crowfly, I really hope you do. I was inspired myself & happy to inspire you. Thank you!!
Re. Sacred Quiver
9th Feb 2019 3:27pm
Re: Re. Sacred Quiver
9th Feb 2019 7:25pm
Yay, I'm glad! I'm so grateful to have been inspired by you & EgoEffect. Definitely more fun than a haiku! Thank you!!
Re: Re. Sacred Quiver
10th Feb 2019 9:08pm
I'm honored, Rjm. Ya know..your absence has been duly noted. I always look forward to your writes. Hopefully you've graced me with one today!!
Re: Re. Sacred Quiver
10th Feb 2019 9:49pm
Thank you, nothing new from me at the moment in afraid, I'm a little dried out. But your work has been worth coming back for 😉.
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Re: Re. Sacred Quiver
10th Feb 2019 10:25pm
My muse is in now in hiding too, I'm afraid. Sigh. It's an awful feeling. I started feeling it after She Reigns. We'll be back at it soon enough though.;)