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Valentine's haiku
secret rendezvous
strewn cork screw and swimwear
sunset visions blush
Written by
JusTim_
Published 31st Jan 2019
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1st Feb 2019 00:08am
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1st Feb 2019 1:27am
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1st Feb 2019 6:54am
Champagne and swimming suggested here...,is the strewn swimwear dry or wet?
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1st Feb 2019 6:21pm
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1st Feb 2019 8:01pm
You mention the sunset's blush - perhaps they were skinny dipping and skipped the cossies.
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Anonymous
1st Feb 2019 1:41pm
Love the image of a blushing sunset! Made me grin this morning, ya did
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2nd Feb 2019 9:56am