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Velvet’s Dream
Lover, lover, lover of mine
Tell me, do our destinies align?
Will my adoring gaze soon trace
The handsome features
of your face?
I long to be your summer’s wife
Make memories to keep for life
That I may think back and treasure
Our shared moments of pleasure
As the clock strikes
the midnight hour
Will you reveal your sexy power?
Oh please then do not relent
‘Til we sleep in sated content
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Tell me, do our destinies align?
Will my adoring gaze soon trace
The handsome features
of your face?
I long to be your summer’s wife
Make memories to keep for life
That I may think back and treasure
Our shared moments of pleasure
As the clock strikes
the midnight hour
Will you reveal your sexy power?
Oh please then do not relent
‘Til we sleep in sated content
...
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27th Dec 2018 6:43am
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27th Dec 2018 7:42am
Has air of holiday romance. Favourite lines:
As the clock strikes
the midnight hour
Will you reveal your sexy power?
As the clock strikes
the midnight hour
Will you reveal your sexy power?
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27th Dec 2018 8:40am
Beautiful poem! After reading your poem, I closed my eyes and pictured a woman and a man standing side by side overlooking the beach. Your poem was the thought in her head and the look in her eye.
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27th Dec 2018 8:52am
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Anonymous
27th Dec 2018 8:50am
Velv,
And a beautifully romantic person, too. You impress me with your writing(and just you), more with everything you write.
Lovely, my friend.
Matthew.
And a beautifully romantic person, too. You impress me with your writing(and just you), more with everything you write.
Lovely, my friend.
Matthew.
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Awwhh, thank you for these charming remarks, you are truly an amazing friend Matthew xox
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Anonymous
27th Dec 2018 9:03am
This drums to such a horny beat. Your jukebox rolls with such velvet verbs & vowels.
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28th Dec 2018 4:40am
That sounds a bit Jungian. Well I’d be happy to participate in the collective unconsious
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Beautiful, intimate, and seething with passion. A great read! Wonderful, elegantly-written poetry!
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