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Dear One
Hear the splash of tropic rains
Rustling of leaves
On soothing breeze
By decree nature ordains
Peace, To set our minds at ease
Luxuriate here with me
My love, My kiss upon your brow
Let this shared intimacy
Remain forever with you now
Our time, Entwined satisfies
Sustains us both on life’s trail
Well beyond our next goodbyes
These loving moments prevail
...
Rustling of leaves
On soothing breeze
By decree nature ordains
Peace, To set our minds at ease
Luxuriate here with me
My love, My kiss upon your brow
Let this shared intimacy
Remain forever with you now
Our time, Entwined satisfies
Sustains us both on life’s trail
Well beyond our next goodbyes
These loving moments prevail
...
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Re. Dear One
27th Dec 2018 4:28am
Re. Dear One
Anonymous
27th Dec 2018 5:24am
Velvet,
What a beautiful writer you are! That's wonderful. Through the poems on here, you can tell when people have beautiful hearts, and yours shines so brightly. I'm so glad I got to know you, my friend, simply because you were so sweet to say hi when I was down. That's an incredibly lucky person, the object of that poem.
Always keep that beautiful heart as it is.
Love,
Matthew.
What a beautiful writer you are! That's wonderful. Through the poems on here, you can tell when people have beautiful hearts, and yours shines so brightly. I'm so glad I got to know you, my friend, simply because you were so sweet to say hi when I was down. That's an incredibly lucky person, the object of that poem.
Always keep that beautiful heart as it is.
Love,
Matthew.

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27th Dec 2018 7:27am
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Anonymous
27th Dec 2018 8:44am
What a sweet person! See DUP's, I told you this girl was special! But no one listens to me. Lol.
Hugs back at you, Velv, you doll.
Matthew.
Hugs back at you, Velv, you doll.
Matthew.

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Anonymous
27th Dec 2018 9:08am
Matthew, you have such a kind soul. The lady is a Morrissey fan, so in my eyes, her words glitter as gold dust......

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27th Dec 2018 9:22am
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Anonymous
27th Dec 2018 9:26am
The boy (boy? he 58 lol) is releasing the most esoteric covers album shortly. I believe there will be a world tour from the sexy whore in 2019. And yes, I think Oz is on the itinerary. So don't you go throwing your pants on the stage. Lol. Rob

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Re: Re. Dear One
27th Dec 2018 9:57am
Thanks for the tip Rob! My knickers in the same room as M? *blush* Such a tempting thought...
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Anonymous
27th Dec 2018 3:47pm
Hey, thanks Trouble! That was very nice of you to say. I appreciate that.
You're a good person, too.
And I was just kidding :), I think a lot of people love Velvet, as they should.
Thank you my friend.
MZ.
You're a good person, too.
And I was just kidding :), I think a lot of people love Velvet, as they should.
Thank you my friend.
MZ.

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Re. Dear One
27th Dec 2018 9:56pm
A fine romantic poem. I agree with the others above. I'm a fan of Morrisey, and of you.
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27th Dec 2018 11:32pm