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sunrise in your eyes
temptation snarled
the winds blew
the morning complained
it was cold
it was frigid in its thoughts
I mirrored its emotions
I held them in myself
they wrestled with my soul
until I was worn out
until I thought I would break
then I saw the sun in your eyes
the hope you keep just for me
the faith you have in me
so the morning be damned
it can keep its cold
complain to someone else
I will be warmed by the fire in your heart
I will find the sun in your eyes
I will hold your faith inside me
until it becomes faith in myself
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Re. sunrise in your eyes
21st Dec 2018 1:37pm
I have had very tough time in the past asking for or even accepting help from anyone. It made me feel isolated, and my take on it was that others were not stepping forward, when in fact I had pushed them away.
Your sweeping through that process like this is a life hack...from having to do it the hard way.
Your sweeping through that process like this is a life hack...from having to do it the hard way.
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Re: Re. sunrise in your eyes
21st Dec 2018 1:40pm
thank you graciously dearest RT I'm really struggling with addiction temptations...it is a real cunt buster at times... then I look in my husband's eyes and see his faith in me or the sun in his eyes and it warms me... his faith in my then becomes my own because I still don't have faith me...
I deeply appreciate your thoughts...
love Brenda 🌹
I deeply appreciate your thoughts...
love Brenda 🌹
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Re: Re. sunrise in your eyes
22nd Dec 2018 2:43pm
Re. sunrise in your eyes
21st Dec 2018 3:29pm
With each day you get through, you'll get a little stronger. Faith takes time.
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Re: Re. sunrise in your eyes
22nd Dec 2018 2:44pm
Re: Re. sunrise in your eyes
22nd Dec 2018 6:30pm
Re. sunrise in your eyes
Anonymous
21st Dec 2018 3:48pm
What a beautiful, beautiful tribute,
So serene, yet so powerfully thankful.
My honest critique is that that is perfect writing, in balance, and emotion.
Great Crimmy.
Love,
Matthew.
So serene, yet so powerfully thankful.
My honest critique is that that is perfect writing, in balance, and emotion.
Great Crimmy.
Love,
Matthew.
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Re: Re. sunrise in your eyes
22nd Dec 2018 2:45pm
thank you dearest Matthew beautiful soul for such an awesome comment...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. sunrise in your eyes
21st Dec 2018 6:16pm
Re: Re. sunrise in your eyes
22nd Dec 2018 2:45pm
thank you graciously dearest I IS ME so happy you liked this one...
love Brenda ✨
love Brenda ✨
Re. sunrise in your eyes
21st Dec 2018 7:57pm
Re: Re. sunrise in your eyes
22nd Dec 2018 2:46pm
Re. sunrise in your eyes
His faith in you is justified. You continue to write lines that have me in awe. "Sunrise" is no exception. I will have to give this further reads to get the variety of themes. I'm a little slow today.
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Re: Re. sunrise in your eyes
22nd Dec 2018 2:47pm
thank you dearest Sir Crow for such a beautiful and loving comment...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re. sunrise in your eyes
21st Dec 2018 11:00pm
Beautiful tribute, it’s always great to see a relationship that is so supportive!
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Re: Re. sunrise in your eyes
22nd Dec 2018 2:47pm
thank you graciously dearest Lyrical One for the love on this write...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. sunrise in your eyes
21st Dec 2018 11:53pm
I will be warmed by the fire in your heart
I will find the sun in your eyes
I will hold your faith inside me
until it becomes faith in myself
I haven't cried in eyes but these lines nearly brought me to tears
wow beautiful stuff
I will find the sun in your eyes
I will hold your faith inside me
until it becomes faith in myself
I haven't cried in eyes but these lines nearly brought me to tears
wow beautiful stuff
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Re: Re. sunrise in your eyes
22nd Dec 2018 2:48pm
Re. sunrise in your eyes
22nd Dec 2018 11:20am
Beautiful writing Brenda. Your imagery really came through on this piece. Dx
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Re: Re. sunrise in your eyes
22nd Dec 2018 2:49pm
Re. sunrise in your eyes
23rd Dec 2018 7:15pm
Your struggle connects us to the universal struggle, it is evocative of resonance, understanding, which awakens compassion. It is a vital awareness to expand. *hugs*
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Re: Re. sunrise in your eyes
25th Dec 2018 5:30pm
Re. sunrise in your eyes
25th Dec 2018 5:27pm
you have
it
in you Brenda!
a moving expression conveying the tussles
delivering it to the reader's heart
a poet, a fighter a loving soul you are.
it
in you Brenda!
a moving expression conveying the tussles
delivering it to the reader's heart
a poet, a fighter a loving soul you are.
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Re: Re. sunrise in your eyes
25th Dec 2018 5:30pm
thank you dearest Cold One for such a beautifully uplifting comment...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕