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Caine
within the agony, there is a heartbeat
it pulses in time with my pain
it knows my name
has my number
torments me where I live
it hunts my steps
I hear the snarls getting closer
it's just behind me
it guts me then steps inside
becomes one with my soul
I am the darkness
I am the rage with no place to go
the hatred speaks loudly
of being lonely
it hurts
so it wants to hurt
I now know its name
I have its number
know where it lives
humanity howls
the darkness grows
it smells blood on the air
its stomach growls
its hunger is my own
rage is spread one person at a time
a virus, a disease
on the winds, the great darkness is freed
now bleed with me
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Anonymous
- Edited 30th May 2019 3:51pm
20th Dec 2018 4:04pm
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Re: Re. Caine
20th Dec 2018 4:09pm
thank you dearest Bender for feeling this poem so deeply pain does have a way hunting us I think...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
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20th Dec 2018 4:06pm
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20th Dec 2018 4:09pm
thank you graciously dearest Lyrical One for the love on this very darkened write...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
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- Edited 27th Dec 2019 12:45pm
20th Dec 2018 4:56pm
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Re: Re. Caine
20th Dec 2018 5:25pm
thank you beautiful Melia for your wisdom pertaining this write... you are deeply appreciated and yes the picture is daunting you're right beautiful lady...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. Caine
20th Dec 2018 7:05pm
"rage is spread one person at a time
a virus, a disease"
... so true; I hope love & compassion can also be spread in the same manner as a counter-force.
a virus, a disease"
... so true; I hope love & compassion can also be spread in the same manner as a counter-force.
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21st Dec 2018 1:47pm
thank you dearest Josh for the beautiful comment yes sigh love will battle the darkness...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re. Caine
20th Dec 2018 7:41pm
You are describing so many on this site that couldn't find the words. Nice job
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21st Dec 2018 1:48pm
Re. Caine
20th Dec 2018 8:45pm
AMAZING WRITE!!
You describe the Bite the Pain the knawing feeling
with excellence and recognition
Pen Praise
XOXO
FIRE
You describe the Bite the Pain the knawing feeling
with excellence and recognition
Pen Praise
XOXO
FIRE
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Re: Re. Caine
21st Dec 2018 1:49pm
thank you beautiful one for your thoughtful and lovely comment on this write...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. Caine
20th Dec 2018 11:03pm
You speak of rage so eloquently, like the spreading of a disease. 'Fraid I caught it. I identify with these lines more than I can say. A fine write, personal relevance aside.
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21st Dec 2018 1:50pm
thank you graciously dearest Sir Crow for the love on this write... somehow I thought you might understand this...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re. Caine
21st Dec 2018 4:26am
Very eloquent Crim. You have touched many who have been affected by it and came out the other end, myself included.
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Re: Re. Caine
21st Dec 2018 1:52pm
thank you graciously beautiful Bonzi for your kind words of understanding yes coming out the other side...no easy task but doable...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. Caine
21st Dec 2018 4:58pm
The demons come for me sometimes, when I least expect them. They know my weaknesses. I am defenceless against them. Though they will never destroy me.
Dark Sun. I understand.
Dark Sun. I understand.
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21st Dec 2018 6:51pm
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- Edited 7th May 2019 00:46am
29th Dec 2018 5:47am
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Re: Re. Caine
29th Dec 2018 12:50pm
thank you graciously for relating to this write on such a deep level and welcome to DU...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
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Anonymous
11th Jan 2019 11:52am
Beautifully written, I loved it.
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11th Jan 2019 1:10pm