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Mother Earth and Father Sun
the dawn sang of magic pure and beautiful
the Earth spun on her axis
enchanted by the song
the sun rose on her enchantment
and warmed her heart
her children all awakened to the melody
sleepy in their beds
they smiled inside themselves
their mother was so happy
their roots tingled a little
slowly one by one their petals open
and they drank in the sun
tiny drops of hope
they shared with the firmament its self
the joy was then passed to the trees
great sentinels of old
who keep watch
they witness the sunrise
and felt their mother's joy
she then sent the wind
to rustle their leaves
and awaken them to the moment
hummingbird came with a story all his own
he whispered it to the flowers
it was then recorded on their petals
sky read it and told the trees
it was then scribed on their leaves
finally, the sun saw the truth
written in the sands
is the magic of poetic life
it revolved around him and his woman
is witnessed in all that is natural
so it was from the beginning
and will be until the end
Written by
crimsin
(Unveiling)
Published 18th Dec 2018
Author's Note
inspired by The Weaver a poem by the beautiful AEmelia...
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/330826-the-weaver/
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/330826-the-weaver/
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Re. Mother Earth and Father Sun
18th Dec 2018 2:43pm
Re: Re. Mother Earth and Father Sun
18th Dec 2018 2:45pm
thank you dearest Tim yes she does... this was inspired my lovely Amelia's poem The Weaver...
I'm happy you liked it...
love Brenda 💕
I'm happy you liked it...
love Brenda 💕
Re. Mother Earth and Father Sun
Anonymous
18th Dec 2018 3:12pm
I think Melia & yourself would write the most beautiful, spiritually channeled, collab?
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Re: Re. Mother Earth and Father Sun
18th Dec 2018 3:16pm
thank you graciously dearest Rob such a beautiful thought... you honor me Melia is a very gifted channeler of light and love...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. Mother Earth and Father Sun
18th Dec 2018 3:31pm
Favorite lines:
" the joy was then passed to the trees
great sentinels of old
who keep watch
they witness the sunrise
and felt their mother's joy
she then sent the wind
to rustle their leaves
and awaken them to the moment " <<----- Beautiful spill, Brenda!
I often do rituals for Gaia
not so much for Helios
" the joy was then passed to the trees
great sentinels of old
who keep watch
they witness the sunrise
and felt their mother's joy
she then sent the wind
to rustle their leaves
and awaken them to the moment " <<----- Beautiful spill, Brenda!
I often do rituals for Gaia
not so much for Helios
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Re: Re. Mother Earth and Father Sun
18th Dec 2018 3:32pm
thank you graciously dearest Tallen it was beautiful Melia who inspired this write with her Weaver poem today...
I'm happy you liked it...
love Brenda 💕
I'm happy you liked it...
love Brenda 💕
Re: Re. Mother Earth and Father Sun
18th Dec 2018 4:00pm
I saw Melia's spill before I saw Yours
and I can definitely see the inspiration :)
and I can definitely see the inspiration :)
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Re: Re. Mother Earth and Father Sun
18th Dec 2018 4:07pm
Re. Mother Earth and Father Sun
Very beautiful and deep imagery ...Love the ink you have given us today my dear...🌹🐺
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Re: Re. Mother Earth and Father Sun
18th Dec 2018 4:09pm
thank you graciously dearest Greywolfman... for the love on this write...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re: Re. Mother Earth and Father Sun
18th Dec 2018 4:27pm
You are welcome dear Brenda...was a pleasure to read this morning as I woke...causes me me to thirst for more of your ink...
With respect and love
Thomas
💞😊🌹🐺
With respect and love
Thomas
💞😊🌹🐺
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Re: Re. Mother Earth and Father Sun
18th Dec 2018 4:32pm
thank you graciously dearest Greywolfman you honor me greatly this one was inspired by a very gifted light bearer the beautiful AEmelia...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re: Re. Mother Earth and Father Sun
18th Dec 2018 4:39pm
Will have to find time to read up on your light bearer Aemelia...
Especially as she inspires you to open up you mind and heart to write such beautiful imagery in this ink...
Love Thomas
🌹😊🐺
Especially as she inspires you to open up you mind and heart to write such beautiful imagery in this ink...
Love Thomas
🌹😊🐺
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Re: Re. Mother Earth and Father Sun
18th Dec 2018 4:40pm
p.s dearest Greywolfman if you do read me please keep in mind I'm bipolar and my writes are deeply affected by my moods...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re: Re. Mother Earth and Father Sun
18th Dec 2018 4:42pm
hey there Thomas 😊 this is AEmelia she is consistently a beacon of beauty...
thank you for your interest...
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poets/AEMelia564/
love Brenda 💕
thank you for your interest...
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poets/AEMelia564/
love Brenda 💕
Re: Re. Mother Earth and Father Sun
Understand your bipolar my dearest...I'm very pleased to know you both....Will be a pleasure...
Your moods are you openly making you very easy to see and enjoy your ink...
Love Thomas💞🐺
Your moods are you openly making you very easy to see and enjoy your ink...
Love Thomas💞🐺
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Re: Re. Mother Earth and Father Sun
18th Dec 2018 4:54pm
You are very very welcome my dearest AEmelia
Your ink has much beauty..
Love Thomas💞🐺
Your ink has much beauty..
Love Thomas💞🐺
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Re: Re. Mother Earth and Father Sun
18th Dec 2018 5:05pm
I do have another account here but sigh AEmelia is not one of them she is a beautiful poetess I admire...
sorry if there was confusion...
love Brenda 🌹
sorry if there was confusion...
love Brenda 🌹
Re: Re. Mother Earth and Father Sun
18th Dec 2018 5:15pm
No need to be sorry my dear...
Thank you for explaining to me...
Love Thomas🌹🐺
Thank you for explaining to me...
Love Thomas🌹🐺
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Re. Mother Earth and Father Sun
Anonymous
18th Dec 2018 4:02pm
Crimmy!
My God! You're just beautiful, my friend! That's fantastic! That 'sleepy in their beds' stanza just melted my heart!
And it's nice that you honored Aeimeilieia, she's a fantastic writer, isn't she? The words she pours out there are beautiful.
Awesome, Crimmy.
Love,
Matthew.
My God! You're just beautiful, my friend! That's fantastic! That 'sleepy in their beds' stanza just melted my heart!
And it's nice that you honored Aeimeilieia, she's a fantastic writer, isn't she? The words she pours out there are beautiful.
Awesome, Crimmy.
Love,
Matthew.
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Re: Re. Mother Earth and Father Sun
18th Dec 2018 4:10pm
thank you graciously dearest Matthew for the love on this write... beautiful Melia deeply inspired me this morning with the beauty of her write...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
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Re: Re. Mother Earth and Father Sun
18th Dec 2018 4:21pm
aw thank you graciously dearest Bender that lifts my heart...it was beautiful Melia's light that inspired me today...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re. Mother Earth and Father Sun
Anonymous
18th Dec 2018 4:57pm
The epitome of interconnectedness. This is very soothing to the soul, my beautiful Dark Angel. I love you...
...ever your Willow
...ever your Willow
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Re: Re. Mother Earth and Father Sun
18th Dec 2018 5:01pm
thank you beautiful Willow for the love on this write I'm so happy the tranquility she made me feel transferred to this write...
I love you...
love Brenda 🌹
I love you...
love Brenda 🌹
Re. Mother Earth and Father Sun
18th Dec 2018 9:30pm
A wonderful and tender write, Brenda. My favorite lines:
the joy was then passed to the trees
great sentinels of old
who keep watch
they witness the sunrise
and felt their mother's joy
she then sent the wind
to rustle their leaves
and awaken them to the moment
This one is a joy to read, Fantastic work, all the way.
the joy was then passed to the trees
great sentinels of old
who keep watch
they witness the sunrise
and felt their mother's joy
she then sent the wind
to rustle their leaves
and awaken them to the moment
This one is a joy to read, Fantastic work, all the way.
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Re: Re. Mother Earth and Father Sun
18th Dec 2018 9:39pm
thank you dearest Sir Crow for feeling this lighter write... I deeply appreciate your thoughts...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. Mother Earth and Father Sun
19th Dec 2018 9:24am
This is a radiant piece of light Brenda, I’ll have to go absorb your inspiration by Melia now... she is a brilliant poetess as well. Your ink is gorgeous here though, you tell a beautiful story!
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Re: Re. Mother Earth and Father Sun
19th Dec 2018 3:21pm
thank you beautiful Nightbird for such a beautiful comment gifting me smiles today... I deeply appreciate you...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re. Mother Earth and Father Sun
9th Feb 2019 9:54pm