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the bench of dreams
I heard you cry in my reverie
my soul ached
I rose the next dawn
to find you blue
your solitude became my own
in your silent times
I sat next to you
on the bench of dreams, I waited
time passed
when you were ready
you told me of your hopes
your life's passions
died a lonely death inside
keepsakes you called them
of a time when you were young
full of ambition
you were going to see the world
and the world would know you
instead, life taught you to be reclusive
I witness your worth
we get up together
you walk into me we are one
my soul's secrets revealed
on the bench of dreams
I met me
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Re. the bench of dreams
15th Dec 2018 3:08pm
Beautiful Brenda such a great piece👏👏
"instead, life taught you to be reclusive
I witness your worth
we get up together
you walk into me we are one" really amazing verse the first line here totally reminds me of myself deeply
Great writing as always Brenda!👏👏
"instead, life taught you to be reclusive
I witness your worth
we get up together
you walk into me we are one" really amazing verse the first line here totally reminds me of myself deeply
Great writing as always Brenda!👏👏
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Re: Re. the bench of dreams
15th Dec 2018 3:26pm
thank you graciously dearest Hunter for relating and for such a beautiful comment...
your sharing is deeply appreciated...
love Brenda 💕
your sharing is deeply appreciated...
love Brenda 💕
Re. the bench of dreams
15th Dec 2018 3:08pm
Beautiful introspective writing dearest Brenda. I see a little of my younger self in your words.
David x
David x
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Re: Re. the bench of dreams
15th Dec 2018 3:28pm
thank you graciously dearest David for such a lovely comment...yes, life can be that way I guess we move on to dream different dreams...
I deeply appreciate your thoughts...
love Brenda 🌹
I deeply appreciate your thoughts...
love Brenda 🌹
Re. the bench of dreams
Anonymous
15th Dec 2018 3:59pm
There's something to be said for sitting alone on a bench. This is so achingly poignant, my beautiful Dark Angel. I love you...
...ever your Willow
...ever your Willow
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Re. the bench of dreams
15th Dec 2018 4:34pm
Nicely presented but I think all you really needed was the first stanza - smiles (briefly)
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15th Dec 2018 4:38pm
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15th Dec 2018 5:04pm
Re. the bench of dreams
15th Dec 2018 5:36pm
just as tatoos fade into inky blobs, who we imagined we'd become fades into who we have learnt to become...a nice reflective piece Brenda
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Re. the bench of dreams
Anonymous
15th Dec 2018 6:02pm
No need to say that this is beautiful and portrays a new found thematic and, as others have already said, an continued and wonderful growth in style and deepness. I learn from you day after day. You are one of the best, if not the best poet on DUP. I bow to you divine one. J
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Re. the bench of dreams
Anonymous
15th Dec 2018 6:29pm
Dearest Crimmy!
Beautiful reflective poetry!
Absolutely loved that! If you and Jade and Purple and...hadn't filled up my RL, it would be on there. Must...make...room...fantastic!
Love,
Matthew.
Beautiful reflective poetry!
Absolutely loved that! If you and Jade and Purple and...hadn't filled up my RL, it would be on there. Must...make...room...fantastic!
Love,
Matthew.
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Re. the bench of dreams
Anonymous
15th Dec 2018 7:47pm
You never cease to amaze Brenda. You are full of unique talent and I am Privileged to be part of your world.
Incredible ink
Incredible ink
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Re. the bench of dreams
15th Dec 2018 7:58pm
"my soul's secrets revealed
on the bench of dreams
I met me'
Thank you, dearest, for the lovely little walk in the park
love
Jeff
on the bench of dreams
I met me'
Thank you, dearest, for the lovely little walk in the park
love
Jeff
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Re. the bench of dreams
Anonymous
16th Dec 2018 1:22am
Brenda.. simply brilliant, my sister.. i fucking love this.. into the list it goes.. love you..
Dave
Dave
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Re. the bench of dreams
17th Dec 2018 4:30am
I gave up on the world knowing me, figured I'd settle for knowing myself. Beautiful write :)
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