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If Someday Ever Comes
If someday ever comes
Will there be a place for me
Will there be someone waiting for me
And will I know how to find him
Will the Lord allow me another start
How will I know I belong
Or will we have to part
Will I have to search for the love that never comes
Was it only in fun
Why did he have to run
What is it that I did
I gave all I had to give
There is so much more to me
Hidden so deep inside
Like lost treasure
It is worth the find
There is days I wish someday never came
I know the Lord must have a plan for me
He is not just playing a game
I know he never wanted to give me so much sorrow and pain
Follow me the Lord says and your life will not be the same
He is our strength to indure the pain
Just take it one day at a time
For there is always sunshine after all the rain
Will there be a place for me
Will there be someone waiting for me
And will I know how to find him
Will the Lord allow me another start
How will I know I belong
Or will we have to part
Will I have to search for the love that never comes
Was it only in fun
Why did he have to run
What is it that I did
I gave all I had to give
There is so much more to me
Hidden so deep inside
Like lost treasure
It is worth the find
There is days I wish someday never came
I know the Lord must have a plan for me
He is not just playing a game
I know he never wanted to give me so much sorrow and pain
Follow me the Lord says and your life will not be the same
He is our strength to indure the pain
Just take it one day at a time
For there is always sunshine after all the rain
Written by
Selosa67
Published 9th Dec 2018
| Edited 10th Dec 2018
Author's Note
written 2004 going through a sad time in my life and writting what I felt got me through somedays
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Re. If Someday Ever Comes
9th Dec 2018 9:49pm
It must've been a bruising time to generate poems such as the one I've just read.
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Re: Re. If Someday Ever Comes
9th Dec 2018 9:53pm
it was , it was hard then
I have learned from my experiences and choices and am better now for it :-)
I have learned from my experiences and choices and am better now for it :-)
Re. If Someday Ever Comes
9th Dec 2018 9:52pm
They say that you will never find love but somehow it will find you. Yes, this is a real 'I'm feeling sorry for myself' kind of poem. We all have those moments. Some more than others. :-)
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Re: Re. If Someday Ever Comes
9th Dec 2018 9:57pm
Yeah I guess it is a feel sorry for me poem, never thought of it that way.
Just was something I wrote a while back when I was left with a young son and did not know what to do or how to deal with it...hard time for me then.
Better now of coarse :-)
Just was something I wrote a while back when I was left with a young son and did not know what to do or how to deal with it...hard time for me then.
Better now of coarse :-)
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9th Dec 2018 10:03pm
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9th Dec 2018 10:17pm
Thank you and I did :-)
Was looking for something and I stumbled on some poems I wrote way back and decided I wanted to save them some how and found this site.
I don't know if it can help anyone but I am sure there will be ones who relate to it.
Was looking for something and I stumbled on some poems I wrote way back and decided I wanted to save them some how and found this site.
I don't know if it can help anyone but I am sure there will be ones who relate to it.
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10th Dec 2018 1:56am
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10th Dec 2018 1:47pm
14 years is long enough to hold on to those emotions. I'm glad you say you are in a better place now. Nice flow and good emotive introspective write. Dx
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Re. If Someday Ever Comes
3rd Apr 2019 7:30pm
Beautiful write ... its the in between times that are often the hardest to endure ... Bless and love ... .
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Re. If Someday Ever Comes
27th May 2019 2:19pm
Beautifully written, though the pain is still very tangible today, I am glad you shared something written a couple of years ago. :)
I'm glad you pulled through and got to where you are now.
"There is so much more to me
Hidden so deep inside
Like lost treasure
It is worth the find " This part is so lovely!
Delanee.
I'm glad you pulled through and got to where you are now.
"There is so much more to me
Hidden so deep inside
Like lost treasure
It is worth the find " This part is so lovely!
Delanee.
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