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Trappings
Written by
Rachelleundrgrd
Published 15th Nov 2018
Author's Note
Written for the visual poetry Comp, Feeling Trapped.
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Re. Trappings
15th Nov 2018 9:41am
Good write. But don't despair. For history has proven, all walls built to separate people have one thing in common; failure.
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Hreat visual, Rachelle. Adds power to the words. I agree with snuggle; think Berlin.
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15th Nov 2018 5:31pm
Powerful combination of picture & words.
{Snugglebuck is right - walls eventually come down - but the misery they cause in the meantime is not o.k.}
{Snugglebuck is right - walls eventually come down - but the misery they cause in the meantime is not o.k.}
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Anonymous
15th Nov 2018 9:23pm
Succinctly superb. As above have all stated, walls always come tumbling down...
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7th Jan 2019 1:51am
Interesting poem. I like how you ended it with the repeated onomatopoeia :)
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7th Nov 2019 3:15pm
I love graffiti! In Tijuana, it takes on surreally powerful size and scope, for both political reasons and the pure aesthetic. Thanks for the comments :), R.
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17th Mar 2020 00:34am