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Wrapped
Wrapped in brawn and fortitude; versed in her body were his hands and arms - ever so amicably was she cradled as he knew she need be. Aloft limbs recently conjoined and bodies now adjacent; still fresh is the allegiance of their love. As if his body were a temple; an alter of discern - solace could his confinement offer. Laid to rest; her every foreboding thought as upon her heart; each treachery lifted. Scripted were his arms. With such tender pliancy; his hold. Dominion could he have over her as sweet salvation could his mind, soul and body give her- she as his most opululent jewel; wrapped in brawn and fortitude.
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Published 29th Oct 2018
| Edited 13th Feb 2019
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29th Oct 2018 4:04am
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29th Oct 2018 2:30pm
Thank you, Lawrence. Intelligence can be pretty sexy, I hope I'm scoring.
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29th Oct 2018 7:00am
Wrapped in brawn and fortitude - a good many women's idea of a muscular lover. Beautiful penile euphemism - his opulent jewel.
29th Oct 2018 2:38pm
Thank you as always. I went back and added she to that euphemism as that was my intent. I can definitely see where it could've been taken as penile though. That's the beauty of sharing writing!
29th Oct 2018 8:45pm
I was thinking about the proverbial 'crown jewels', but your rewrite has a beauty of its own.
7th Nov 2018 1:27am
I missed this, I'm so sorry. Do know I appreciate it so very much..thank you!!
29th Oct 2018 11:29am
Oh my dear, this makes me want to be wrapped in brawn and fortitude.
Well done as always Pandora!
Well done as always Pandora!
29th Oct 2018 2:39pm
Anonymous
29th Oct 2018 11:59am
You are an exquisite, visual writer my dear. You are refined, as always in your use of depictive, yet very researched terms that give your writings a life and a feature of their own. One day, when talking of your poems, it will be said: this is Pandora style writing. Very opulent and delicate writing my sweet friend. J
29th Oct 2018 2:44pm
That is what I love to hear, J! I tell you all the time that I'm not quite sure what I'm doing. If I am doing something though, I sure what it to stand out a bit differently! Thank you, as always for taking note and may I keep learning something from you pro's...
Anonymous
29th Oct 2018 8:10pm
I am only a humble word chaser. I scribble. The greats are others my sweet friend. I am only human. J
2nd Nov 2018 6:29am
Again this is the very type of poem that the erotic genre was was meant to be. Such artistry in your words - no extreme content warning here - Just a beautiful slice of erotica :-)))
Excellent Ink :-))))))
Excellent Ink :-))))))
5th Nov 2018 8:29pm
I am humbled by your comment. Especially so, as I'm trying my hardest to strive in such a direction. I've done crass many times, but I'm ready for so much more. I'm certain beyond words, the best and even most arousing can be written without one crude word. Thank you so much, David!! You made my day...
4th Nov 2018 00:22am
5th Nov 2018 8:33pm
You said it my friend. Thank you for reading and I think you gave me a reference for future reference and I love that!
"union in unison"
"union in unison"
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5th Nov 2018 8:33pm
Anonymous
8th Nov 2018 3:15am
Pandora.. simply brilliant.. you've got skills.. much respect..
Dave
Dave
