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Ambrosia
In a banquet of sumptuous delights; with deference does he indulge, such a sweet sultry deed. Celestial are her depths, as if a river abound to his tongue. To his face; her gyrations so relentless. In her repletion and that of her creamy rapture is of his only precedence. With complacency does she sweetly sigh as assiduous are his endeavors. Her impassioned sentiments, like sweet Ambrosia; nectar of the God's - upon his face, then allocate.
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Published 7th Nov 2018
| Edited 27th Jan 2019
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7th Nov 2018 6:45pm
Brava Pandora! I had an immediate physiological reaction just reading the title. I now know your work and can tell when I'm in for a sumptuous, intelligent read. Salivation and levitation is bound to occur. Can you some how convey scent with your pen? Then I would embarassingly undone.
8th Nov 2018 2:10am
Thank you so very much for your most endearing comment, as always. Yours always bring a smile to my face. I'm honored you liked it and humbled you added to your RL!! I will work on adding in some fragrance to my ink. Lol
7th Nov 2018 7:51pm
It's always a lyrical delight savouring the richness in your use of language...much like savouring your ambrosia (I imagine)...love it...
8th Nov 2018 2:11am
Thank you for the kind comment as always. I'm working hard on my language so I appreciate the praise!
7th Nov 2018 8:06pm
Such an elegant write, this is playful and erotic delivered wrapped in a bow of subtle indulgence :-)))))
Excellent Ink
Excellent Ink
8th Nov 2018 2:13am
Thank you from the bottom of my heart, David, for such a wonderful comment. I appreciate your kindness!!
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Anonymous
7th Nov 2018 10:03pm
The beverage of the gods. It gives bliss and immortality to those who drink of it. You have a very good knowledge of the classics and make good use of mythological attributes and scenery. Very good my dear. You are mastering what you feed your soul with. Very very beautiful. J
8th Nov 2018 2:20am
As always, the comment and accolades I look for. Thank you as yours touch my soul. I'm blessed beyond words to have found one such as yours. You know I'm working hard and cheers to your help and encouragement in helping them grow. Much love and respect, J. Hugs too.
8th Nov 2018 1:55am
8th Nov 2018 2:16am
Pandora.. luscious erotica.. tasteful, yet powerful.. brilliant.. much respect..
Dave
Dave
8th Nov 2018 2:24am
I thank you for such kindness about my words, Dave. I appreciate them so very much. I need and make it priority to make my rounds around here tomorrow, hoping to find something new from you;)
9th Nov 2018 11:33am
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