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Fuckery
I hear you calling for the meat of me
the blood lusting reality
yeah, I'm a bitch from around the block
demon teeming, filth-ridden girly'o
you know me...
that's not going to change
a whore's rage will rise to the top
stepped on, strung out on the cum yo
fierce in my steps
mean streets race through my veins
I learned it all out there
walking the trap
meeting the main macks
tracks up and down on my arms
but look close
my scar looks like a lightning bolt
marked by the gods
all for something better
meant for a different life
refined fuckery
defined bedevilment
you can bet on it they will hear me
when I speak devils shiver
I know them
slept withum
got up with tics yeah
bloodsuckers kept me out
now I'm coming in the house
to bring it down
hell yes...
Published 27th Oct 2018
Author's Note
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27th Oct 2018 3:02pm
27th Oct 2018 3:06pm
Anonymous
- Edited 30th May 2019 3:51pm
27th Oct 2018 3:18pm
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27th Oct 2018 3:20pm
27th Oct 2018 3:24pm
The Audi track is missing on my end, is there a way to get that button back?
27th Oct 2018 3:26pm
22nd Nov 2018 3:11pm
22nd Nov 2018 3:17pm
27th Oct 2018 3:24pm
27th Oct 2018 3:27pm
giggles thank you beautiful Teri for you continued love and support... you are a lady of wisdom...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
27th Oct 2018 4:54pm
1st Nov 2018 8:49pm
Anonymous
27th Oct 2018 5:46pm
Crimmy,
You amaze me more with every poetic output.
You're fantastic!!
Love,
Matthew.
You amaze me more with every poetic output.
You're fantastic!!
Love,
Matthew.
1st Nov 2018 8:50pm
aw thank you dearest Matthew you're amazing yourself my friend...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Anonymous
27th Oct 2018 6:12pm
Now I see the come back of the mistress of poetry of the Underground! Fast and furious! My lady, I am truly in awe! Hugs and love to you J.
1st Nov 2018 8:51pm
thank you graciously dearest Juvenalis for the love you show me...
love & hugs...
Brenda 🌹
love & hugs...
Brenda 🌹
27th Oct 2018 9:04pm
I love it when you get tough. I get the sense that you have street smarts to spare, some hard times shared. My favorite lines:
stepped on, strung out on the cum yo
fierce in my steps
mean streets race through my veins
I learned it all out there
I wish I had your resilience, and you have my respect for your experience. Truly fine work!
stepped on, strung out on the cum yo
fierce in my steps
mean streets race through my veins
I learned it all out there
I wish I had your resilience, and you have my respect for your experience. Truly fine work!
1st Nov 2018 8:52pm
27th Oct 2018 11:00pm
1st Nov 2018 8:52pm
1st Nov 2018 9:18pm
Anonymous
28th Oct 2018 1:49am
HELLLLLL YYYESSSSS !!!!
1st Nov 2018 8:53pm
29th Oct 2018 11:00pm
i can't say how much i love this, everything is here: your voice, the past; and pure energy and hope looking at a future
that's an anthem no doubt about it
that's an anthem no doubt about it
1st Nov 2018 8:54pm
thank you dearest Anna I really admire your writing that means a lot...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
Anonymous
- Edited 8th Feb 2019 10:53am
1st Nov 2018 10:39pm
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1st Nov 2018 10:49pm
Anonymous
2nd Nov 2018 1:01pm
And there's the boot stomping bad ass I've come to know and love. Bringing the fierce to the page. Go ahead on, girl. Take 'em down. I love you, my beautiful Dark Angel
...ever your Willow
...ever your Willow
Anonymous
- Edited 22nd Nov 2018 3:25pm
22nd Nov 2018 3:24pm
Your voice gives it the shot of glory. You can absolutely rock the house my dear one. Very hot and powerful write. Hugs and love. J
22nd Nov 2018 3:28pm
22nd Nov 2018 3:29pm
Anonymous
- Edited 23rd Nov 2018 00:12am
22nd Nov 2018 6:02pm
Aye fuckery indeed (such a grand word) channeling some Viking esque rebel here and it's sick ass fuckery indeed.
Sin...you're recording now too? Nice
Sin...you're recording now too? Nice
22nd Nov 2018 6:51pm
Wow, Crim...I need a shower after this. I feel it. You shut it down...:-)
Dark Sun.
Dark Sun.
Anonymous
22nd Nov 2018 7:48pm
Beautiful Crimmy,
I love that with the video! It's soooo awesome to hear your little voice to associate with the fantastic you.
Thankful for you on Thanksgiving!
Love,
Matthew.
I love that with the video! It's soooo awesome to hear your little voice to associate with the fantastic you.
Thankful for you on Thanksgiving!
Love,
Matthew.
22nd Nov 2018 9:50pm
Spoken mic, all the way with lyrical flow. Well, now we know what you sound like lol liked
23rd Nov 2018 00:00am
23rd Nov 2018 1:29am
"marked by the gods
all for something better
meant for a different life" 👏👏 I feel this big time, excellent writing as always Brenda good to hear your voice as well I dig this one✌👏
all for something better
meant for a different life" 👏👏 I feel this big time, excellent writing as always Brenda good to hear your voice as well I dig this one✌👏
2nd Jul 2024 1:00pm
