peach blossom

my feet carry me to the river
where I bathe
a soul fully undressed.

a soul fully undressed, now that's a heavy line
nothing really left to hide

this is awesome

thank you graciously dearest POT for feeling this so deeply...

love Brenda 🌹

Such a lovely image you create

thank you graciously dearest Tim for feeling this vibe...

love Brenda 💕

I feel your words Bren. At end of day, all us writers, are lost souls. Seeking hope in forest of words. Keep writing. keep believing.

thank you graciously dearest Rob we are lost seeking the truth mirrored back at us through our words...

I deeply appreciate your wisdom...

love Brenda ❤

You've touched my deepest, intimate thoughts, dear Brenda. I too see the flowing of the waters as a place of exposure of my soul's deepest desire to be itself, purified by the flowing waters. Only difference, I believe that to be reborn by the waters, I need to let myself go to the river's destructive stances and die. Beautiful write my dear friend. J

thank you dearest Juvenalis beautiful soul for understanding and feeling this so deeply...I too have thought the things you speak of... though I know I'm selfish in wanting you here with me... I do understand...

love & hugs...

Brenda 🌹

simply beautiful poetry Brenda
i find this

expression
spiritual in its imagery

thank you graciously dearest Cold One for such a beautiful review...

love Brenda 💕

such a beautiful cleansing, crimson
good to wash away that which drags us down
like a baptism of sorts

thank you graciously beautiful Ani for picking up the essence of this write and showing your love on it...


love Brenda ✨

it was my pleasure :)

Melodic and peaceful. Liked

thank you graciously beautiful Nari...

you're deeply appreciated...

love Brenda 🌹

You as well, babe

Hi Crimmy,
That's beautiful, my friend.
And it suits you! Underneath that strong façade is a beautiful, little child.
I've seen it all along.
You're awesome, my friend!
Love,
Matthew.

You always write from your heart. Your beauty radiates from your soul.

Dark Sun.

Lady, you're hitting your stride
without the help you thought you needed.

This is one great example that you can do so.

Enjoyed, Brenda

Soft n sweet...just how I like my peaches... :)

Sometimes you simply have to walk away because staying would hurt you more. Keep staying strong lovely lady.
Jaded🌹

Short and sweet, one I feel warmed by.  Thank you for the morning lift, Brenda.  It should last the rest of the day.

That's right!!
Just wade in the water!!

Amazing!!!