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daddy's girl
I was daddy's little girl
the wild girl no one but he could handle
looking back maybe not even him
I tried my best to be good when he was around
a troubled child
my real mom neglectful
by age three when he got custody
I was more than a handful
he's long since passed
so why am I sitting here thinking about him?
I miss him
I can just hear him in my mind
girl it's time you be about your business
time to move forward
no looking back
my drug days are breathing hard on me
I can see us packing up in his old truck
we're on the open road
without even a glance behind us
Author's Note
me and my dad always picked up and left when there was trouble
he's passed on now somedays I wish he was still here so I could pick up and leave... though I know my problems would follow me...anyway today is a better day...my former drug days aren't breathing down my back so hard anymore...
he's passed on now somedays I wish he was still here so I could pick up and leave... though I know my problems would follow me...anyway today is a better day...my former drug days aren't breathing down my back so hard anymore...
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Re. daddy's girl
24th Oct 2018 6:08pm
Re: Re. daddy's girl
24th Oct 2018 6:14pm
thank you graciously beautiful Dragonfly I was having a real hard day the other day and I could hear him in my mind... feel him standing just behind me and knew things would be alright...
I deeply appreciate the love on this special write...
love Brenda 🌹
I deeply appreciate the love on this special write...
love Brenda 🌹
Re. daddy's girl
24th Oct 2018 6:14pm
Re: Re. daddy's girl
24th Oct 2018 6:15pm
Re. daddy's girl
Anonymous
24th Oct 2018 6:18pm
From one daddy's girl to another, if the day ever comes that I don't think of or miss him, it will mean I'm finally laughing with him again somewhere beyond. I feel the pull of this one, my beautiful Dark Angel. He's there, watching over your shoulder and encouraging you to move on...leave the past behind you. Tomorrow is a new day. I love you...
...ever your Willow
...ever your Willow

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Re: Re. daddy's girl
24th Oct 2018 6:29pm
thank you beautiful Willow yes us daddy's girls sigh they are there with us always...I believe you are right he's telling me it's time to move on into a new chapter in my life...giving me the love and support I need from where he is among the stars...
I love you...
love Brenda 💕
I love you...
love Brenda 💕
Re. daddy's girl
24th Oct 2018 6:18pm
Lovely crim I'm so sorry for your loss. Sometimes you just need to run but other times running leads to freezing. Fight on my lovely lady.
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Re: Re. daddy's girl
24th Oct 2018 6:43pm
thank you beautiful Jade don't feel sad he's always with me...yes I'm going to stay where I am but fight the good fight where I can do most good...
I appreciate you lovely one...
love Brenda 🌹
I appreciate you lovely one...
love Brenda 🌹
Re. daddy's girl
Anonymous
24th Oct 2018 6:56pm
Crimmy,
That was beautiful.
He is looking down proudly at his girl.
And he did a fantastic job!
Love,
Matthew.
That was beautiful.
He is looking down proudly at his girl.
And he did a fantastic job!
Love,
Matthew.

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Re: Re. daddy's girl
24th Oct 2018 6:57pm
Re. daddy's girl
24th Oct 2018 7:27pm
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Re. daddy's girl
24th Oct 2018 8:33pm
it seems the older we get the more we look back...eyes on the road now Brenda...forward we go...
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Re. daddy's girl
24th Oct 2018 9:12pm
Re. daddy's girl
24th Oct 2018 11:24pm
Poignant and bittersweet
He would be proud of you for fighting the fight...
He would be proud of you for fighting the fight...
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Re. daddy's girl
26th Oct 2018 2:44am
A fine portrait of your father. My favorite lines:
I can just hear him in my mind
girl it's time you be about your business
time to move forward
no looking back
Sounds a bit like my own late father, whom I still miss after all these years. And once again you reveal another facet of your colorful and fascinating life. Excellent work.
I can just hear him in my mind
girl it's time you be about your business
time to move forward
no looking back
Sounds a bit like my own late father, whom I still miss after all these years. And once again you reveal another facet of your colorful and fascinating life. Excellent work.
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Re. daddy's girl
28th Oct 2018 9:05pm
Your father is a wonderful man. He deserves to bring him back to mind very often.
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