Wicked

Definitely a painful chant. The music accompanies excellently the words. We are a result of many life situations. We are not just one. We would like to think that everything is either black or white, but it's not. There are so many shades of us. Beautiful write my dear Jackie. Hugs my friend. J

Just a little perspective. Music takes me places
Juvi, Hugs back atcha 🤗
Jackie xxx

Thanks for the reading list Juvi ❤️

I mean what is insanity anyway?
Judge not least ye be judged! Thank you for taking the time to read this and write a thoughtful response Tod..
thoughtfully
Jackie Xx

So many of us hide our true selves.  It could be a fear of being perceived as mad, or any number of things.  Secrets prevail, and faces really tell us little about what the mind contains.  I hope I understood this write, but in any case I love it.  It gets me thinking.  Loved the Beethoven accompaniment, by the way.  Perfect piano background to your words.  This is one of your best!

Yes nothing is really as it seems anyway.
Everyone, every single person is hiding something.. I suppose it’s the “Crazy people “
Who bare it all... idk, I was just thinking 🤔 was in deep thought when I wrote this.
My music was on and I came across this Beethoven song  “Silence”’and well, the rest is history..
Loves you Crow❤️
Jackie

The things you say here on my page makes me feel that all the struggles in my writing;  
the ups & downs  highs & lows  and the unknown poetry, makes it all worth it..  
Yeah it’s funny,  I can’t imagine writing without music,  Music is the core, and the internal clock  
in everything I write..

You are quite a gifted writer in that your duality is so singular! and for that it takes true talent!!!
Huggsss you...
Zazzles ❤️

I don’t remember how to upload an audio video from YouTube here, anymore. If I did, I would post this type of poetry with me narrating them ...

I use Audacity to record my voice to an mp3 file, then a website called tunestotube to upload to YouTube. Yes I listened to the music honey. Hope this day finds you well.

Thank you Daniel 😊

I found Todski's interpretation interesting. Hardcore emotion Jackie.

Daniel

Hey Daniel .
Yeah this is one of those writes that has many many levels. Funny how that happens ...
Did you listen to the music while reading this?
Just curious  
Hugsss
Jackie xxx

Very nice write.. thanks for sharing such a good poem

Thank you Ralph, nice to meet you :)
I’m happy to know you stoped and had a read from me, and twice as glad, you enjoyed what you read :)
Zazzles 😊

I love this simple, yet expressive piece you have here! I really ought to get better about reading poems here on DUP because I regret I missed this one. You asked for honest critique and I always try to critique those who want it if I have the time because I believe every poem can be improved somehow. In this poem, I find the last line to feel a little forced. (So typical in rhyming poems....I find that the 'forced' feeling often comes in the last stanza somewhere, even in my own poems.) I don't have any specific suggestions, but if you choose to change it, I know you are quite capable of finding a great replacement. Overall, though, great work, I really enjoyed this! Hugs.