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The Divination of Bubbles
descending into clarity
warmth hugs every crevice
an exhale of certainty
tension at ease; I now focus
on this moment, just the one
where time stands motionless
pastel bubbles foretell my fortune
and I sink below the surface
tingles creep up my spine
follicles sway at the indulgence
tip back my glass of fine wine
and know: my future is limitless
Published 27th Sep 2018
| Edited 30th Sep 2018
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Inspired by HJF
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Ahhh. . .bubble baths and a good warm red are two of the best medicines life can perscribe. Great imagery, Gem.
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30th Sep 2018 2:18am
Oh yes, sipping my Pinot Noir and letting the bubbles do the talking; what more could a lady ask for!
27th Sep 2018 9:59pm
Yes indeed, the calm before the storm, as I contemplate whether to switch on the jets, releasing the turbulent waters to mask all thought.
Great relaxing read,
Great relaxing read,
30th Sep 2018 2:21am
There’s nothing quite like the comfort of escape in your own home. Let the jets rumble!
27th Sep 2018 11:18pm
30th Sep 2018 2:22am
30th Sep 2018 2:22am
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- Edited 27th Dec 2019 12:45pm
28th Sep 2018 10:13am
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30th Sep 2018 2:23am
30th Sep 2018 3:11am
Really enjoyed the syllabic flow and message. Subtle, not rushed.
Daniel
Daniel
30th Sep 2018 3:23am
In the rush of life, it’s important to slow down and appreciate the flow. Glad you enjoyed it so!
