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She Warms My Heart
She warms my heart, she stirs my soul
a perfect match is what I'm told
my eyes are lit with her sweet embrace
as my mind rewinds to her pretty face
our days too short, our nights not long
I lean real tight to hear her song
I beg her lips as we both draw near
a lasting kiss laid with loving care
I crave each touch, I yearn each hold
keeping her ever close as we grow old
a perfect match is what I'm told
my eyes are lit with her sweet embrace
as my mind rewinds to her pretty face
our days too short, our nights not long
I lean real tight to hear her song
I beg her lips as we both draw near
a lasting kiss laid with loving care
I crave each touch, I yearn each hold
keeping her ever close as we grow old
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Re. She Warms My Heart
18th Sep 2018 00:03am
Re. She Warms My Heart
18th Sep 2018 00:24am
our days too short, our nights not long
I lean real tight to hear her song
now that I relate to those moments you wish you can just freeze time
great write
I lean real tight to hear her song
now that I relate to those moments you wish you can just freeze time
great write
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Re. She Warms My Heart
Anonymous
18th Sep 2018 2:27pm
Always with a sense that there's more to this than meets the eye...beautiful and romantic poetry, Tim :-)
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18th Sep 2018 3:34pm
Re. She Warms My Heart
18th Sep 2018 3:28pm
I love the some sparkling rhyming words...long and song...hold and old...really romantic and beautiful write.
Jasmine
Jasmine
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Re. She Warms My Heart
18th Sep 2018 7:42pm
You're a lucky man to have a such a companion. I have to admit I envy you this, and your skill with a love poem. An excellent job!
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Re. She Warms My Heart
19th Sep 2018 10:30am
This was a delight to read, both for its form and rhyme, and for the warm fuzzies that grew on my heart. May you and she live happily 💝
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19th Sep 2018 12:48pm