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First Timer
She didn't like the campus film
A movie aptly called "The Damned"
She still took him gently by the hand
As they strolled to the co-ed dorm
The elevator took them up
And she didn't say a single word
Knowing how the night would go
How a boy fully becomes a man
He was clumsy from the start
Fumbling with their scruffy clothes
Finally getting off her duds
In awe of her fulsome charms
She guided him between her legs
His aim being not precise
She led him with a patient hand
Guiding him so deep inside
His moan soon announced he came
Felt maybe like he scored a win
His eyes shining with a new man's pride
No longer just a sweet virgin.
A movie aptly called "The Damned"
She still took him gently by the hand
As they strolled to the co-ed dorm
The elevator took them up
And she didn't say a single word
Knowing how the night would go
How a boy fully becomes a man
He was clumsy from the start
Fumbling with their scruffy clothes
Finally getting off her duds
In awe of her fulsome charms
She guided him between her legs
His aim being not precise
She led him with a patient hand
Guiding him so deep inside
His moan soon announced he came
Felt maybe like he scored a win
His eyes shining with a new man's pride
No longer just a sweet virgin.
Author's Note
Based roughly on my own first time.
Photo from the movie "The First Time."
Photo from the movie "The First Time."
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Re. First Timer
8th Sep 2018 6:00pm
Oh this so beautiful ... fragile ... genuine ... thanks for sharing crowfly ...
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8th Sep 2018 6:11pm
So glad you like this LilDragonFly! I'm happy to share, although I don't usually go for the personal. Guess I'm very shy, in a way.
Re. First Timer
8th Sep 2018 6:26pm
Some try not to remember this awkward moment, but the way that you lay it out seems cool
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8th Sep 2018 6:44pm
Thanks I_IS_ME. There was awkwardness on my part but she was very cool, and patient.
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8th Sep 2018 8:16pm
It takes me awhile, space case that I am, but I get it now. Thank you I_IS_ME!
Re. First Timer
8th Sep 2018 11:49pm
Great write! The memories it invokes for me are both appreciated, and intrusive.
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Re: Re. First Timer
9th Sep 2018 7:18pm
Thanks Reggie. I'm just glad I invoked some memories. I'll try to stick with the fond ones.
Re. First Timer
9th Sep 2018 8:26pm
Very well described. Nice to be taught by someone with patience and experience. And it won't be his last time.
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