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To you, thank you
Right now I would like to say hello
Stoned, chilled, relaxed and mellow
I was just sitting here and got to thinking
The way you smile and cringe at my poetry
Always makes me smile and that's the real me
Because without your reminder I feel alone
So lets take this moment and get stoned
You might not comment or even like my shit
But we can't deny feelings are understood and legit
And to me that means a lot so here's a thank you
For letting me having a wonderful breakthrough
And just know ill keep an eye on you
Reading your struggles while you breakthrough
I might not comment or even like your shit
But I'm still there with you and never regretting it
Stoned, chilled, relaxed and mellow
I was just sitting here and got to thinking
The way you smile and cringe at my poetry
Always makes me smile and that's the real me
Because without your reminder I feel alone
So lets take this moment and get stoned
You might not comment or even like my shit
But we can't deny feelings are understood and legit
And to me that means a lot so here's a thank you
For letting me having a wonderful breakthrough
And just know ill keep an eye on you
Reading your struggles while you breakthrough
I might not comment or even like your shit
But I'm still there with you and never regretting it
Published 4th Sep 2018
Author's Note
Thank you I mean that sincerely
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4th Sep 2018 12:36pm
This is really beautiful and not just because i know why. I kinda like this softer, lighter side of you and i hope you will allow it to peek out to say hello from time to time. And quite honestly, I also do enjoy your other "shit" too. Just keep going with the flow and thank you, thank you.
