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Hard Man Blues
I miss him tonight;
the hardest man I knew
my dad
looking back knowing what I know now
I guess he had some weaknesses
but don't anyone tell me that
not to my face
he couldn't do no wrong
always on the move
one mistress after another
never let his heart get dust on it
kept it burning
moody boots planted firmly on the ground
he loved women
just not one woman for long
and that was fine with me
because I was his little girl
the only one who went with him
when he was done with a scenery
then we would pile in his old truck and head out
he knew one thing sure
there was never a shortage of them
women
who would love a hard man
give herself on a gamble
hopes of him falling in love on the table
never did though
he made sure it stayed that way
I never liked a man who falls too easy
something not to be trusted in that
blame my own dad;
for my love of a hard man
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- Edited 30th May 2019 3:51pm
18th Aug 2018 6:06am
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18th Aug 2018 6:11am
thank you dearest Bender I get you yeah me and my dad didn't see eye to eye when he died still I miss him...
there were a lot of soft sides to him too like he would watch cartoons with me and I always felt safe when he was around... he was such a force to be reckoned with...
larger than life...
ah well :)
I appreciate you taking the trip down memory lane with me...
love Brenda
there were a lot of soft sides to him too like he would watch cartoons with me and I always felt safe when he was around... he was such a force to be reckoned with...
larger than life...
ah well :)
I appreciate you taking the trip down memory lane with me...
love Brenda
Re. Hard Man Blues
Anonymous
18th Aug 2018 6:08am
Poignant for Sunday morning Brenda (6 am here). The past is strange country.
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18th Aug 2018 6:12am
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Anonymous
18th Aug 2018 6:15am
Oops! Meant Saturday. Still half-asleep
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18th Aug 2018 8:25am
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18th Aug 2018 10:00am
giggles yeah DC you're right...
thank you my friend for the love on this write...
love Crim 😊
thank you my friend for the love on this write...
love Crim 😊
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18th Aug 2018 9:01am
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18th Aug 2018 10:01am
thank you beautiful Sweet One yeah it just might be instinct that drives us...
deeply appreciate your visit 🌹
deeply appreciate your visit 🌹
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18th Aug 2018 10:01am
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18th Aug 2018 10:03am
thank you dearest Dark Sun he is the one person who most affected me growing up...
I deeply appreciate your thoughts 😊
I deeply appreciate your thoughts 😊
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18th Aug 2018 2:56pm
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18th Aug 2018 4:24pm
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18th Aug 2018 5:53pm
thank you dearest Lawrence for your interest... yes it's a true story...
love Brenda
love Brenda
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Anonymous
18th Aug 2018 8:15pm
Brenda.. nice title.. even better poem.. always love the blues concept.. so much truth in your crimsin words.. loved this.. into my list it goes.. love you..
Dave
Dave
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Re: Re. Hard Man Blues
18th Aug 2018 8:20pm
thank you my brother Dave for your continued love and support so happy you liked this very special poem for my dad 🌹
love you my friend...
Brenda
love you my friend...
Brenda
Re. Hard Man Blues
18th Aug 2018 11:47pm
My father was a tough, confrontational man. Always said "Don't ever let anyone push you." Can't say I've always followed his advice there, but he was an inspiration as a writer. He was a journalist, not a poet, but taught me a love for the written word. Excellent work all the way, Crim!
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Re: Re. Hard Man Blues
19th Aug 2018 7:27pm
thank you dearest Sir Crow for identifying with this write and sharing about your day with me...
I deeply appreciate you...
love Crim
I deeply appreciate you...
love Crim
Anonymous
- Edited 25th Oct 2022 6:45pm
19th Aug 2018 2:51am
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19th Aug 2018 7:27pm
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19th Aug 2018 7:13pm
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19th Aug 2018 7:29pm
hey there beautiful Dragonfly so happy to hear from you 😘 yeah us daddies girls 💕💕
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re. Hard Man Blues
19th Aug 2018 8:11pm
This has such an easy, earthy flow. I can't help but feel it would be make a great country song.
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Re: Re. Hard Man Blues
19th Aug 2018 8:15pm
aw thank you Daniel giggles I tried to infuse my dads spirit here in this write... he had that Earthy no pretensions feel to him...
I'm happy you picked up on that😊
love & hugs...
Brenda
I'm happy you picked up on that😊
love & hugs...
Brenda