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I Don't Want To Be Your Vocabulary Constabulary
Is The Reason You Oppress To Just Crowd Impress
Or Is It An Inadequacy So You Speak Bombastically
I Only Ask You So You May Speak Now And Confess
You Are So Afraid Of Elucidating Pusillanimously ;
Words Are Healing And Words Are Dark Weapons
They May Awaken Yet They Can Definitely Deafen
Just How Do You Wield Your Local Vocal Vocabulary
Is Your Library A Sanctuary , Does It Bite When Necessary ?
Is That A Note You Wrote I Can Sink My Teeth Into ?
In Your Exposition Of Your Position What Do You Construe ?
Do I Need To Listen When All From You Is Your Repetition
I Keep Hoping This Time It Will Be A Cognition Transmission
Or Is It An Inadequacy So You Speak Bombastically
I Only Ask You So You May Speak Now And Confess
You Are So Afraid Of Elucidating Pusillanimously ;
Words Are Healing And Words Are Dark Weapons
They May Awaken Yet They Can Definitely Deafen
Just How Do You Wield Your Local Vocal Vocabulary
Is Your Library A Sanctuary , Does It Bite When Necessary ?
Is That A Note You Wrote I Can Sink My Teeth Into ?
In Your Exposition Of Your Position What Do You Construe ?
Do I Need To Listen When All From You Is Your Repetition
I Keep Hoping This Time It Will Be A Cognition Transmission
Published 12th Aug 2018
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Fine vocabulary and an awesome write, Blackwolf. You're quite right is saying "Words Are Healing And Words Are Dark Weapons". I like your style. You capitalize to powerful effect. One detail: "Constanbulary" is spelled constabulary. Otherwise fine.
12th Aug 2018 7:27pm
Thank you , good sir , CrowFly , especially
for the vocabulary correction ;
Those for me I do try to keep to a minimum ,
yet when dealt with in a gentle way , are most
welcome and appreciated !
for the vocabulary correction ;
Those for me I do try to keep to a minimum ,
yet when dealt with in a gentle way , are most
welcome and appreciated !
I have given and I have received
Sometimes my words are misperceived
I am inquisitive but not the inquisition
I try to clarify my position
We all at times can fail in expression
And suddenly arouse others aggression
I am aware more now than ever
Using words with great care keeps fair the weather
And yet there needs to be freedom to express
Our opinions and thoughts without distress
I guess we all try to navigate
I hope we can communicate
Without trying to eradicate
Obliterate
Infuriate
I know what you are talking about BW. We all fail sometimes, but then we learn. I feel nowadays there are landmines everywhere. I sometimes happen to make a joke or ask a question and all hell breaks loose. It's not my intend to offend when I step in someones issue. I don't like walking on eggshells, I move on finding a good old dirt road instead. They are still out there.
Sometimes my words are misperceived
I am inquisitive but not the inquisition
I try to clarify my position
We all at times can fail in expression
And suddenly arouse others aggression
I am aware more now than ever
Using words with great care keeps fair the weather
And yet there needs to be freedom to express
Our opinions and thoughts without distress
I guess we all try to navigate
I hope we can communicate
Without trying to eradicate
Obliterate
Infuriate
I know what you are talking about BW. We all fail sometimes, but then we learn. I feel nowadays there are landmines everywhere. I sometimes happen to make a joke or ask a question and all hell breaks loose. It's not my intend to offend when I step in someones issue. I don't like walking on eggshells, I move on finding a good old dirt road instead. They are still out there.
12th Aug 2018 11:15pm
Great comment , Angelast , and even better poem ;
Publish that one ( just change "received" )
And I stepped on , and in some people's issues ,
rather unknowingly , and O the stench...;)
You can smell it from a mile away !
Publish that one ( just change "received" )
And I stepped on , and in some people's issues ,
rather unknowingly , and O the stench...;)
You can smell it from a mile away !
13th Aug 2018 1:19am
13th Aug 2018 1:30am
13th Aug 2018 3:19am
power of words
damn you're king when it comes to playing with words
the fist two lines feels directed to politicians who haul big terms at illiterate factions of the crowd
then you take it down to how words can be influential or how they can be the difference between life and death
this is a great poem all together
damn you're king when it comes to playing with words
the fist two lines feels directed to politicians who haul big terms at illiterate factions of the crowd
then you take it down to how words can be influential or how they can be the difference between life and death
this is a great poem all together
13th Aug 2018 4:40am
Thank You , my friend !
You gotta take it to all levels
you can as you speak your truth ;
Such a fragile thing like unto
the moth or the butterfly...
You gotta take it to all levels
you can as you speak your truth ;
Such a fragile thing like unto
the moth or the butterfly...
