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Shadowed land
I walk across the land, when the night falls you'll see me best, I succumb to hunger In her glow,
I walk a shadowed land, a hollow world
You only hear storys, most won't ever see, till the hunger realises me,
I walk a paralyzed land, a shapeless ruin of a broken world, a paradise for only me, I succumb to hunger In a her glow,
A lost face that you will never know, horrific darkness, my shadowed land in her glow
I walk a shadowed land, a hollow world
You only hear storys, most won't ever see, till the hunger realises me,
I walk a paralyzed land, a shapeless ruin of a broken world, a paradise for only me, I succumb to hunger In a her glow,
A lost face that you will never know, horrific darkness, my shadowed land in her glow
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25th Aug 2018 10:39pm
this is pure poetry. made me shed tears all over my casserole in the back of a RV.
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30th Aug 2018 7:40pm
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1st Sep 2018 6:17pm
Fantastic imagery; it reads like a mournful vampire drifting through a broken world post-Skynet. This is the first piece of yours I’ve read, and now I’m definitely looking forward to more
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1st Sep 2018 6:50pm
Thanks mate glad you enjoyed it, your interpritation of it is pretty much what I had in mind when I was writing it.
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2nd Sep 2018 7:33pm
Really enjoyed the originality of this piece.
Very nicely done Crow ..
I don’t have a favorite stanza, as the whole poem resonates perfectly👍
RL
Zazzles
Very nicely done Crow ..
I don’t have a favorite stanza, as the whole poem resonates perfectly👍
RL
Zazzles
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Anonymous
11th Jan 2019 2:13am
I really like the imagery. A primal feel that makes wish to be back in the Carpathians.
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11th Jan 2019 7:44am
Thanks for reading and your comment. I like your reference to the Carpathians I had a mountain/woodland image in my head as I wrote this.
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